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Reviewed By: Sirona_Argante [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 19:40 CDT
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Wow. This was a great story! I showed it to my friend (a devoted Kurama fangirl) and she couldn't finish it. She liked the storyline, but I think the prospect of Kurama dieing made her scared. Now I have to go read the sequel...
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Title: sorry to come so late
Reviewed By: bancomat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 09:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry to review so late. I, in fact, read the story last year and figured I'd review after I read 'Forever, Fornever'. The story is wonderful, it kept me in front of the computer screen all night and I was late for school the following day because I just had to read it to the end (a very impressing end, if I may add). You have kept the characters in character, the story had a wonderful flow, I couldn't find any majour grammar faults, the way Hiei and Kurama interacted was ... I'm not really sure what is the word for it (loved the way they kept score..:))) and, firstly, I liked the fact that you didn't just throw the love story in there...
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Title: FFRG review ch1
Reviewed By: Sihde (Sisi) On: September 28, 2005 23:45 CDT
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The first thing I've noticed in your story is your fair grammar-very nice. The only thing I could suggest a beta to you for would be to look over your story and catch things you've missed/odd sentences. "Fiery-red locks" is just an odd expression. Overall, the only problem I see in the first bunch of paragraphs is that you're over-wording things. You've got a good line with the story that my limited knowledge of YuYuHakusho can tell me. You've got body, and flesh to your story. There's description and plot. But you need to add emotion. There seems to be very little of what your characters are actually thinking or feeling. You've got a good story going on.
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Title: FFRG Review--Chapter 1
Reviewed By: misslady [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 22:44 CDT
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This is a good start to a story. It flows very well. Yes Kurama is a bit ooc but that is ok. You did a good portrayal of his dreams making him out of sorts. The rest of the characters seem to be in character pretty well except Hiei but he is hard to do in character. I am struggling with that boy myself :o) Just check a bit on the spelling of some words. Please keep up the good work. misslady
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 16, 2005 10:37 CDT
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**sniff sniff** it is over. no. i loved this story and all its chapter. it was great. now i have nothing to read. **sniff**
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Reviewed By: qtchan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 10:08 CDT
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That was a wonderful ending. *gets all teary eyed* I love this whole story! Congratulations on completing it. ^-^
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 12, 2005 16:55 CDT
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iloved this chapter. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: qtchan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 16:14 CDT
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I love this story! Please update again! If you make a sequal, I can't wait to read it then! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Fan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was definitely one of my favorite Kurama stories! i have never felt so addicted to it and now i like Kurama even more! but not as much as Hiei...plz update soon because this is such a good story! i couldn't find anything wrong with it! again great story!
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 07, 2005 21:08 CDT
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i loved this chapter it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: qtchan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 15:32 CDT
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Update! Update! Update! ^-^ It is so good!!!! I have to see what's going to happen. Another showdown with Karasu v.s Kurama! I love this story!!! ^-^
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Title: nightangel15
Reviewed By: nightangel15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 14:51 CDT
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this is an awesome fic, and i love how you have hiei showing emotion, and kurama with stubborn sarcasm. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: phoenixfirekitsune On: July 30, 2005 12:40 CDT
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This is a really interesting story. I really enjoy the plot and the way the characters are portrayed. Please keep up the good work and update soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: July 29, 2005 17:58 CDT
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i loved this chapter. it was great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: qtchan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 10:18 CDT
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That was awesome! I never would have expected that to happen! Please update soon, I just got to know what happens next! ^-^
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