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| "Aw, Man!" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: The_Lost_Alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe. he was all like dammit! hehe. that was cool and funny.
| Reviewed By: kiki14 On: June 20, 2005 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I really liked that. Like... a lot more than I thought I would. I mean it was just so cute... in a mature content kinda way. You know, I would completely support you if youmade a sequel. Completely. Anyway, the whole plot was nice, and if you don't make a sequel I won't mind too much, ok well I will but it really was sweet the way it is. I enjoyed it a lot and i'm not much of a one-shotter person. So, if you make a sequel I'll be watching for it! Toodles!
| Reviewed By: ibogal On: June 13, 2005 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwwwww! What a deliciously cute little ficlet. I'd be proud if I wrote this, with or without plotbunnies. Is English your first language? I only ask because there were places where you mixed your tenses, and it was just a bit distracting. I absolutely love your idea, though - poor dear Eddie needs some love in his life!
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