| "Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: shuichiinluv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it ^-^
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Reviewed By: ladyvampire On: August 04, 2005 00:54 CDT
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Very hot! :D My only criticism is that I don't think Jin would beg. (Dishonorable and all that.) I think he'd just roll them over and, ah, take what he wanted. Topping from the bottom, as they say. ;)
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Reviewed By: laurabryannan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 07:58 CDT
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Fantastic! Very hot, very believable. You wrote the characters true to the story, which made it all sorts of fun to read. Thanks much for posting this, and I hope you continue this plotline.
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Title: DAMN!!
Reviewed By: Miss Demonic One [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sooooo hot, passionate, erotic, and wild, I sincerely hope that you will write more MugenxJin stories, I've been waiting for one like this ever since I saw the first episode, Keep writing ^_^ Peace and Harmony to you.
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Title: Village Idiot :P
Reviewed By: Wicked Samus On: July 14, 2005 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really wanted to rate the style of writing with "WOO!" more than ten, but I guess ten will suffice...for now...*looks around and laughes evily* I must say I am a big fan of your story. It was well writen and I like the whole Mugen on Jin thing. Their probally one of my favorite yaoi couples. I hope you write more MugenxJin stories.
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Reviewed By: nikki the kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Would've given them eleven's if I could* Oh, oh, hey, did you put this on AFF too? 'Cause if you did, I've read it before; SO AWESOME! I love those two SO MUCH; Fuu, sorry. Jin is beautiful, don't you agree? Ah...well, to get to the point, I really liked your fanfic, and if you have any MORE fanfiction, I'm eager to read it. ~Ciao!
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Reviewed By: lil' crazy head On: July 03, 2005 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, that was soooooooo hot!! Thank goodness some one made a fanfic about Mugen fucking Jen befor I went even crazyer!!!! ^__^
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Reviewed By: law916 On: July 02, 2005 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!! I LOVE WHAT YOU HAVE DONE.
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Reviewed By: kossde [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you a 6 for originality because..... it wasn't ridiculously original (tho.... that didn't matter at all!!!) I was AMAZED at how well you wrote it. Somehow, you made these two crazy masculine men do something so bizzare and erotic.. AND.... even better... you managed to keep with their character personalities! I loved it..... i read it twice.. You have an amazing talent.... too amazing to limit it to fanfics :)
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Reviewed By: caSS___ On: June 04, 2005 05:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
yumm....
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Reviewed By: USuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 15:38 CDT
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Man that was hot!!! So very carnal. You should write a second chapter where Jin gets to take the lead. I like it when the quiet guys dominate. I like how you incorperated the gruffness of their personalities as well as their psychologies. Criticisms... I don't think Jin would say "Fuck Me," but you made it work. Maybe next time he'll get his revenge and make Mugen do something embarrassing. All I really have to say is MORE MORE MORE!
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Reviewed By: The Grim Spectre of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 15:23 CDT
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Finally, yaoi in this series. THANK YOU!
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