| "Beautiful Thing" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Aestrin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 12:37 CDT
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sounds good. i like it so far.
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Reviewed By: cranberry On: August 20, 2005 08:20 CDT
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Hot! Too bad Jin didn't act on his desires at the end of the 1st chapter ;). I hope you write a third chapter, though, where some of the emotional conflict (both within and between them) gets resolved. You did a great job writing that, btw, without being it being angsty or anything (unlike so many fanfic writers). One nit-picky criticism - Mugen is *not* a samurai, he's just a warrior. Samurai's a title (like a knight), and you have to earn it through the kind of formal training Jin's had. And samurai (and *only* samurai) always wear two swords.
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Reviewed By: Comedienne On: August 03, 2005 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is hot! I love stories about hot guys kissing. Hope to see a new chapter soon! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: laurabryannan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 07:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! I liked Jin's struggle with the reality of his life, both with Mugen and Fuu and also with his killing. Hope you keep writing and let the guys find a way to be together.
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Title: Very nice
Reviewed By: animeempress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 13:13 CDT
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Wow this is a really good story and the way Mugen came on to Jin like that was just surprising. And I've never heard ot seen Jin lose his cool so that was something nice to see. I can't wait to see more of this story
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Title: Woo!
Reviewed By: joliemorte [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Freaking wonderful. I love your portrayal of the characters, which is so true to canon that it's almost hard not to see this happening in the series. Great job.
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Reviewed By: fruits of Eos On: July 17, 2005 20:26 CDT
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i'm really liking the development of the story so far, and the way the relationship between Mugen and Jin isn't over dramatized or taken severely out of character. really like so far, update soon! :D
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Reviewed By: NubianQueen413 On: July 02, 2005 23:25 CDT
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Mugen sure is sadistic isn't he? Alot of implying, it took a little while to get the story, but it's good.
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Reviewed By: law916 On: July 02, 2005 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These boys are hot. Keep up the good work. I hope to see a new chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Chelisha, but it wont let me log on [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 00:26 CDT
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The new chapter was amazing. I tried a Samurai Champloo fic, but the characters were to spntaneous to predict. Nice job.
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Reviewed By: The Grim Spectre of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 16:24 CDT
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^.^ PLEASE WRITE MORE!
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Reviewed By: Chi Herrero On: June 13, 2005 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw man! That was such a tease. I loved your portrayal of Jin. I tried to do a Jin/Mugen, but I ended up with a Jin who was too weak. But you, wow, you really got into his mind. You're an excellent writer and I admire your ability at characterization.
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Reviewed By: chelisha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 21:29 CDT
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OMFG, i LoVe it. This is THE BEST Samurai Champloo fanfic i have ever read. *smirks* i like mugen. ^^ lol but seriously, i cant wait for you the continue this. If u need any help, email me. (jadudesi@aol.com)
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Title: Mauz
Reviewed By: Mauztattoo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Woo Hoo! Excellent job and keeping both in character as well.
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