| "Yugi: Spirit Blacksmith?!" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blue Wolf Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic, but might I suggest the use of paragraphs and some kind of indication of scene changes. Just a friendly suggestion. Anyway, please update soon.
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Title: lest-see-mai-doing-balll-dancing for- yugi
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: August 03, 2008 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah it-if-mai-doing-baleey-danceing-for-yugi
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Title: queenoflight
Reviewed By: queenoflight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2008 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I found Originality/Creativity, i heard from friend you had this story that 32 chapters in fanfiction.net. I like read, hopeful you will update.
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Reviewed By: wing white angel On: July 06, 2008 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you haven't updated in ages. did you give up, it was good i read it on fanfiction.net.
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Title: wow-mai-in-harem-drooling-about-mai-as-paert-haerm
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: June 18, 2008 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah-wow-mai-in-harem-oh-exuse-me-for-drooling-over-mai-in-haermwaer
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Title: yugi
Reviewed By: wing white angel On: January 27, 2006 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should finish what you started
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Reviewed By: Alexander the Unholly On: August 18, 2005 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never played Thousand Arms before, but now i want to! Your writing is as wonderful as ever DJ! Keep going!
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Reviewed By: Shadow Sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this are you going to update soon please? I love all of your stories I hope to see more of it in the future so, UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Red Dragon Of Egypt On: August 02, 2005 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey DJ great chappie and remake to a great a story but alas it seems that Yami and the rest of them still have yet to take the sticks out of there ass oh well there loss as far as im concern and as for wich ele beast suits yugi best i guess the Dark one would work it would be a good replacement for the one he lost or rather the one who went A wall on him well DJ keep up the great work ND U CAN DO IT YUGI IM ROOTING FOR YA *goes into a blood red cheer leader outfit then does a few rousing cheers for yugi* GO YUGI GO YUGI UDA BOMB WHOSE THE MAN WITH THE PLAN YUGIS THAT MAN BOOOYA hehe gtg now JA NE ^__^
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Reviewed By: erika On: June 24, 2005 14:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
it nice reading it again.
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Reviewed By: erika On: June 12, 2005 14:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
please take your time
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: ylink12345 On: June 12, 2005 02:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey dj its me kevin ur cousin well this is a nice story u r prolly the best there is. and alexis says u should publish ur stories. bye seeya later
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Reviewed By: erika On: June 07, 2005 18:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
i thnik a Double-edge Sword are cool but it your decision to decide
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Reviewed By: Dragonandswordmaster On: June 05, 2005 19:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I could definitly use a katana, but I'm also strong enough to use a Claymore, but fast enough to use a rapier. I'm curious on how a knife can be used effectively in a fight without gettting to close, unlike with the Claymore or katana. Anyways, I can't wait to see how you remodeled when Yugi goes to the Mirror of Souls. This game must be a challenge with all the swords, yet you can't keep the magic if you change swords. Oh well, I could use a good challenge with a new RPG. Baten Kaitos is a challenge, but this game sounds as if it takes the cake in the rpg world. what system is this for.
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Title: yugi spirit Blacksmith?
Reviewed By: the undertaker On: June 01, 2005 09:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yugi /ishizu together the end of is fanfiction very good fanfiction keep it up.please and thank you your friend dale ray cameronii
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