| "Fire and Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2001 02:19 CST
Comment/Review:
What's Bulma's problem? Vegeta should be enough to make any girl happy for the rest her life *sighs dreamily*. Anywho, can't wait to see what happens next. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 23, 2001 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, so everyone is in shock due to Veggie's politeness. Now what's up with Bulma? If I had someone like that hottie in my life you wouldn't be able to chisel out the smile on my face! Anyway, onward to the next chappie for some answers. Later |
Reviewed By: Skipbillion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2001 00:18 CST
Comment/Review:
If there was a creepy guy in my shower, and he started groping me...! The end result would be me screaming like I saw a spider and strangling him with a wet towel, not having sex with him.. O.o What I'm kinda saying is you didn't develop very much emotion between the two.. Where did this whole love thing come from? Oh well.. *shrug*
=Skip |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2001 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2001 10:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This very good! I sure hope you plan on updating this! There just got to be more! |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2001 05:07 CST
Comment/Review:
wow! you made my day susan! as always! :) thanks so much for supporting me! i feel like a starving artist who is living off other people's criticism :) i'm going to try and make it the best of both worlds :) and next time it says lemon warning, angel, just skip it if it grosses you out :) but for yall who like it: read on! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 21, 2001 02:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 7 was really cute. I know I'd keel over if Veggie started to act civil. As far as chapter 6 goes, there was no porn that I could see. V/B love each other and what they shared is passion squared. There's a damn difference. Besides I recall seeing a WARNING that there was going to be a lemon. As far as I'm concerned your stories have always been tastefully done, and I haven't seen any other reviews to the contrary. So plow ahead kiddo and keep on doin' your thing. Only change the context if your heart tells you to. Pease |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2001 23:43 CST
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hehe im not a porn freak, im simply stating what i think would actually happen. this is so not hardcore, trust me :) if it really bothers you, i'll tone it down a lil. i promise the actual lemon will be more romantic instead of "porn-ish". |
Reviewed By: Angel On: December 20, 2001 07:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fan fic displays intense sexual behavior, therefore declaring you a porn freak. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 20, 2001 06:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a tasty lemon and, like I said before, an extremely cold shower is waiting for me. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 17, 2001 06:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn good chapter. I have a feeling that when those two finally get it on I'll need to take an extremely cold shower. Please another chappie, like soon? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 15, 2001 02:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOHHHHHH YYYYEEEEEAAAAHHHHH!! I can see where this is going. Can I watch? (hehe) |
Reviewed By: Mademoiselle [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2001 21:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Hehe, can't wait for more : ) |
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