| "Fire and Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2002 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! You're evilier than me (is that even a word?). Okay I think I have some explaining to do. You see when you updated the 'hidden lemon' chapters I just assumed you were reposting the story and didn't read the summary box so that's why I didn't review sooner. I hope that explains things. Well I hope you update soon.-JB |
Reviewed By: PrincessBulma [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2002 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, very sweet fic! great job! |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2002 23:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooh sorry for the confusion Kandy! i think the epilogue was meant to be chapter fifteen, but since i added the hidden lemon, it was kinda shifted. anyway, that lemon is supposed to be before everyone realized what was up with them (i think that was chapter nine). anyway, thanks for reviewing and i hope you like what's about to come! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 29, 2002 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dammit you have become truly evil. I can't believe you're gonna string this along till I have a heart attack. I WANT THE LEMON ASAP!!!! Oh, btw, the chap was great and I think before long Veggie will be putty in Bulma's hands ^_~. |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2002 15:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHAT?? There is no chapter 15!! I wonder why. |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2002 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the second time I read the Epilogue, and I still love it. Strange, but I don't remeber reading chapters 16 & 17? Any ways, I liked it a whole lot, and I don't know, I just liked it. Words do not express. Is Trunks ever going to get that paper done? |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2002 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH Yeah!!! The beginnings of a super lemon! Hurry please with the update! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 26, 2002 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naughty Naughty Firaga!! You are such a tease to leave it like that. Please update asap. I can't wait to see what Bulma does to Veggie. |
Reviewed By: Mei On: May 19, 2002 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story! This story is extremely, extremely well written. The style of writing was just awesome and the plot is great. For those who think its too 'pornish' theyre being stupid b/c there IS a warning for your story being a lemon. Mei |
Reviewed By: Mei On: May 19, 2002 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story! FINISH IT!!!! lol, i want to kno what happens after the party and if Mr. and Mrs. Briefs will ever find out what happened and what will happen between Vegeta and Bulma when the two week time period is over. ^_^, This story is extremely, extremely well written. The style of writing was just awesome and the plot is great. For those who think its too 'pornish' theyre being stupid b/c there IS a warning for your story being a lemon. NOW, ne ways on with the show and i can't wait to read the rest of the story and what the outcome will be!!
Mei |
Reviewed By: dal On: May 05, 2002 06:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
bAahhhhh well no interesting things basic thigs like they lust and they fuck maybe something more too but i dun noe since i only read untill chap 6or7 |
Reviewed By: Beji-chan(visiting from fanfiction.net) On: April 16, 2002 10:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, very nice! Vegeta was a little teensy OOC somteimes, but I thought this was really sweet!
Good work! |
Reviewed By: dark_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2002 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omgosh..that was such a sweet ending!! |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2002 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the ending to that was sooooooooo sweet. i realy liked it. its official you are my number 1 fav fic writer. |
Reviewed By: kandi On: February 02, 2002 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was ridiculosy funny. the best comedy fanfic i have ever read. please keep writing more |
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