| "A Royal Birth: Sequel to His Little Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: September 12, 2005 10:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*wipes tears* you have got to stop making me laugh this hard! i swear it should be illegal to laugh until your sides hurt! nice work, great update(s). my only complaint is the chapters are too short. *pouts* but i understand....you're working on like what? 6 stories at once? lmao!
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 16:58 EDT
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kagome and inuyasha fighting.....what else is new? well the others ever get use to their way of showing affection i wonder. keep up the good work. thanks for the review on my poem. not many have read it yet...every little bit helps :)
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Title: fantastic story
Reviewed By: ewunia On: September 11, 2005 12:34 EDT
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This is fantastic story. One of the best I read on mediaminer and ff.net. I love your ideas and wriing style. All your stories are great. And I hope that when this one is finished you will write the continuation.
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Title: A Royal Birth
Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 11:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this & can hardly wait for more, I have you bookmarked specifically since I'm reading most if not all of your stories.
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: September 07, 2005 10:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wooohooo! go kagome! girl power! ok, yes that was kind of lame, but come on...how often do we get to see kagome kick the crap out of people? i look forward, very much i might add, to the second part. ill see if i can get you a pic of shiori's father. i got one around here somewhere.
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Reviewed By: Sango_the_taijiya (nli) On: September 05, 2005 14:15 EDT
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That was a great chapter. Sango finally had her baby. I wonder what she's gonna name her. If you need a name for her, let me know. I know alot of japanese names. Anyway, good job!!! ~Amanda (AKA Sango)
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Title: Can't wait for more.
Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 01:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for more in this story. i've read all of the ones you have written and this one is by far my favorite. Seeing the Ice Prince melt, is priceless. when are you posting another chapter? soon i hope. luv ya.
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Reviewed By: mirokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 19:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awesome! PLease,please UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: KuraiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 16:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Thanks for the update. That was a great b-day present for me, to update on my birthday and everything. I would love for you to send me an email when you update your chapters if you wouldn't mind! My name is Savanna and my email is Savvy277@msn.com. I absolutely love your story and it has been my favorite for a while now. Good luck and thanks again! Savanna
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Reviewed By: ama_tori [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 03:02 EDT
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Hmm... my computer stopped sending me alerts of your updates *sobs* but i'm all caught up now =^^= *gasps* I'm signed in!! {horror!}
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Title: I LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 23:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter and thanks for getting over your writers block. I am glad that things seem to have been explained better to both Toga and Sesshomaru how Kagome is feeling. I do hope that Kagome will get past the hurt and really sit down and have a talk with her mate and her father about how she is feeling it isn't good to keep all those emotions bottled up. Thank you for a glimpse within the relationship of Inuyasha and Kagura. Also thanks for the update on Sango and Miroku and for Kashu her mate and Souta. I don't know how long Kagome will be staying in her room though. I think that she will still be mad at Sesshomaru and feel quite embarrased about what has happened though I really think that she will need some time to get over the initial shock first. I hope that everything works out for her. I really think that she needs the support of her mate, Inuyasha, Toga, her mother and brother the most right now. Also could you please let us know if she is carrying a boy or a girl sometime soon. I hope that the next child is also full youkai too and even if it is a hanyou it doesn't matter as long as the baby is healthy. Although with her miko powers flaring when Sesshomaru pissed her off does that mean it affected the child she carries in any way. I hope not. She would never forgive herself if it did. I await your next update. Thank you very much.
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Reviewed By: Ice Princesss On: August 08, 2005 21:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic it is rilly Enjojable pleas keep going.
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: mew_inchigo On: August 03, 2005 12:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i got very confused about who mated who???, butn the story was very nice.
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Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 21:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chapter. At least now I can understand how much Kagura will be coming into Inuyasha's life. Although Inuyasha is still very protective of Kagome and that's a good thing too. What a wonderful surprise with Toga and Souta? I think that makes for an interesting addition to your story. Although I wonder what is going to happen now that Souta is an inuyoukai that bears Togas crests. I think things will be getting much more interesting with the visiting Royals there too. I do hope that Lord Mitsunaro's mate gets to spend some time with Kagome despite the fact that she is on Bed Rest until further notice being that it will probably drive her absolutely nuts. It would also be good to have Kagura and Kanna have a visit with her and the pups too. Also don't forget Sango and Miroku too. There seems to be a little twist with each additional chapter that you put out and it has me beaming and waiting for more. I await your next update. Thank you so much.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: amori kuwabara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 23:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW 2 chapters this time. I'm very impressed. I like the fact that Kagome considers Kagura & Kanna her friends and I am sure that they will be there for her. Sango & Miroku's change into inuyoukai was a very interesting addition to the story. Thank you for exploring the exhaustion theory with Kagome as we all know that with 5 pups to care for it can be hectic on any woman indeed and with her being pregnant with yet another pup can take it's toll on her form. The addition of the visiting lord and his mate and their children will probably help Kagome if his mate could have some time to talk with her and help her to see that she is not alone and that when she needs help that it's OK to ask for it. I hope that now Sesshomaru will have a better understanding of his mates condition and will personally so to it that she receives the necessary care that she needs and support and contentment. Let's not forget Toga and Inuyasha and the role that they will play into all of this. I am greatful for the little visit with Souta but what happened to him after Kagome took her bath. I hope that Kagura can handle both Rin and Shippou as I think that she will make a very good mother one day. I hope that Kagome gets the rest that she really needs because it will become much harder on her as the pregnancy with this new pup goes on. I await your next update and thanks for making my weekend absolutely wonderful. Thanks again.
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