| "A Royal Birth: Sequel to His Little Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: VB On: September 06, 2009 01:49 EDT
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What ever happened to that epilogue you promised?
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2009 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please slap an ending on here, i wanna know how it ends! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Naru_Fluffy_ZuZu_Koga_Miroku_Bankotsu_Jakotsu_Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 09:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please add an epilogue soon. This is one of the best fanfics Ive read.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 09:47 EDT
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Looking for the epilogue. hehe. and looking for it to be highly entertaining. *grins*
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 06:24 EDT
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I cannot say I'm happy that you've decided to pull a DameWren on us. But it's a fact that eventually everyone must leave fanfic to move on to greater things. Go with grace, wayward friend, I wish you well in your endeavors. If you ever happen to get published, let us know. (Oh, and if possible, keep your Mm account active so we can still read your stories, unfinished or otherwise)
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Title: LOVE IT ALL
Reviewed By: seeme4real [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 23:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was just wondering if you were going to do an epilogue on this story. Or when the other 3 stories would be coming out. I know that you are busy but please update soon. I thank you so much for a most enjoyable reading experience. Thank you for all your plots twists and turns with this story. I absolutely loved it.
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 04:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed the 'His Little Girl' seies more than any other Inuyasha fic. Imagine my surprise to discover that you have a terribly weak conclusion. It reminded me of the the old Power Rangers show when they'd all connect their weapons together and fire all at once, thus rendering the entire battle meaningless up to that point, since they could have done that from the very beginning and saved themselves the hassle. Even so, I am bolstered by the prospect of reading three more.
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Reviewed By: speedy_turtle On: November 28, 2005 17:56 EST
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yes you do rock. you should be queen. you need like the PULITZER PRIZE for these works of art.ALL HAIL WW!or cheese i cant remember which.
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Reviewed By: speedy_turtle On: November 28, 2005 17:53 EST
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write the mini series now please with sesshy sprinkles on top!
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Title: Update soon!
Reviewed By: Inulvr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 12:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU SO ROCK!!!!!! You have such good stories!!!! Please update soon!!!
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Title: A Royal Birth
Reviewed By: FranklinBe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 20:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall rating 1 trillion. Fantastic!!!! Amazing!!!! Awesome!!!!! I absolutly love the way you are descriptive with everything. I Love the way you transform the humans into demons. I love the way you get the couple together. I love the way you are descriptive with Kagome's dilemma and the females having their pups. But I think you should have more of Sesshomaru. I also love the way Toga returns and Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship. Let's just say that I love everything about your story. Keep up the great work!! You should come up with a animation on your own. You would make millions and be renouned around the world. By the way how old are you? Oh and could you read my fanfic's, Love's Path and A New Life and give me some pointers? If you don't then that's okay. I Love all your fanfics. If your a good drawer then you should get people to draw the characters. I have some of them and they look pretty good. You're awesome!!!!!!!!!! (LOL)
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Reviewed By: ewunia On: October 27, 2005 13:53 EDT
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Like i said once. I love the story but before there is a big gap between the chapter 'Interlude' and 'Battling youkai'. There should be more I think like 2 chapters. Also there is no battle beginning just that Sango drops in the middle of the battle. There should be more before it. It feels like there is chapter or two missing there. Otherwise the story is fantastic.
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: September 29, 2005 09:25 EDT
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please forgive me while i hang my head and sob, lol. wow....three more stories...don't you ever get tired? As of right now I don't have any title suggestions for you, but then again I just woke up....literally. let me brain catch up with me then i might have something....until then, best of luck on the writing!
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 16:07 EDT
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Great chapter. but what's going to happen between kagura and inuyasha. you left that one wide open... can't wait for the next installment. and i love the idea of a trilogy. can't wait to see what you'll do with the third story....
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: September 17, 2005 20:08 EDT
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Does Miroku have a tail? I think he'd look so cute with one. You did not mention if he had one.
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