| "GunDread SEED (Redition)" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: starpunk 64 On: March 27, 2007 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey man your story is cool i have a crossover fic idea. for it called Neon Genesis Mobile Suit Gundam SEED this is my fan fic idea this takes place in the world of eva and in the Cosmic Era in this story there is no End of EVA after All the angels have been defeated the world was back to normal kaji is not dead and tell the U.N. about nerv true plans Toji never lost his limbs during the 13 angel Asuka is recovering from the 15 Rei is staying with Shinji and Misato Nerv is Reconstructing Unit 0 3 and 4 and Shinji is still shinji. but out of the blue an new angel and starts Attacking Nerv when shinji asuka and rei Attack It the angel begins to exhorbs not only them and their evas but all Tokyo-3 as well into a exploding In to the Cosmic Era . when the 3 Pilots some how tranportin to the neutral colony of Heliopolis and not in their Evas 1 month before the Episode 1 in seed they met with kira and his friends and when the day the Zaft attack the colony Shinji and the girls will SURPRISE when their Evangelions turn into G-weapons aka Gundams . well that mine idea seeya.
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Title: Explanation
Reviewed By: EternalFreedom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 21:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
I will explain why it was similar to Hung's work. When I started this, I tried looking for a summary section for the episodes in VanDread, due to the fact that there were no sites that had enough decent information on the series ever since it was no longer aired for several years, and at the time, I had forgotten a large portion of the story. Hung's story at the time proved to have the most accurate descriptions and I used it as a template and I asked permission, however, since I was new back then...I neglected to mention that I asked Hung's permission to use his work. Naturally several people accused me of stealing his work, I went to the Guestbook in his website and offered a formal appology for that matter and would have resigned from mediaminer to prove that I was serious about accepting responsibility. Hung himself told me not to stop writing and said he was actually flattered that I think his works were very impressive and so, he told me to keep going. If you don't believe that, then you can go to the Guestbook and see for yourselves, though it will be back a few pages. Hung now tells me that I do have potential and tells me to work on my own, plus I do ask for advice from him when he can spare the time...and that helped resolve that conflict. I hope that this cleared it up...and I apologize to anyone who may think I am stealing ideas.
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Reviewed By: alright On: March 15, 2007 06:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story but your story is way to much like Hung Nguyen fic it pretty much follows exact same as his story but all you have done is changed name and added in a gundam insted of technoman good try. You may have changed alot later in the chapters but while i was reading just felt like i was reading Hung Nguyens fic all over again so i stopped at chapter 4 Best of luck with your fics
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Title: Very good
Reviewed By: Tifa_Lockheart022 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey all i have to say is that i really enjoyed reading Gundread Seed. And all i have to say is hurry up and write some more chapters and bring second stage on.
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Title: rip off
Reviewed By: Dark_Hound [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
well that was kinda interesting but i\'ve seen the entire cartoon and i must say that you just rewrote the story and placed Kyo in place of hibiki. love your style of writing tho, but the story line is to close to the real series. sry
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Title: Impressive
Reviewed By: Jehuty Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very enjoyable, I really liked it, though it was very long.
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