| "It all started with the fat guy...." Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: IMPORTANT
Reviewed By: MatoriExile yep On: October 15, 2004 12:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
**ANYONE ELSE INTERESTED IN READING MORE THAN THIS PLEASE VISIT ME IN FANFICTION.NET UNDER STRIFE21. THANK YOU**
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Reviewed By: hjkfgtfcng On: October 14, 2004 02:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
ummmmm i think you need to update
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Reviewed By: vulk90 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 21:14 CST
Comment/Review:
LOL this is good! |
Reviewed By: Faye Hidaka *in love with Vicious and Ken-kun* On: June 09, 2002 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I'm waiting for the rest of it! I already red the 7 chapters on the other websites, and I can't wait anymore to see the rest! Please please please, finishi that things soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2002 20:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
HEY !! WHEN YOU GONNA WRITE MORE!!
it was getting good again |
Reviewed By: Pocker Alice On: April 07, 2002 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great!!! Onegai Shimasu!!!! Keep writing, I have got to read the end of this!!!!! Onegai!!!! ^_^
Faye Hidaka, Pocker Alice, Siberian |
Reviewed By: Asieko On: February 23, 2002 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perhaps the characters (mainly Spike) seem OOC at times but overall it's enjoyable and I'd like to read more of it when it comes! |
Reviewed By: FlameAsuka On: February 17, 2002 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really a very nice Chapter. The Spelling was good, almost no mistakes ^^.. also this was pretty original and i enjoyed it very much ^^ Plz put up the next chapter!
~FlameAsuka |
Reviewed By: Stif On: January 27, 2002 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this fanfic. I love to see Spike & Faye fanfics & there arn't that much around. Please Continue!! |
Reviewed By: E-chan Hidaka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2002 19:57 CST
Comment/Review:
pretty good...please continue if you can |
Reviewed By: WearsMothersKnickers On: January 19, 2002 11:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
There were quite a few commas missing, lol. Plenty of people have thought about Faye and Spike being something, but it would never happen. But screw Julia, anyway, right? I was sort of bored with it, though. It was much too perfect. |
Reviewed By: bratkitty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2001 22:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I like Spike and Faye fics. That episode was funny. I liked the fic, I want to see a sequel. |
