| "His Woman" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: jordy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 15:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
again i say please update!!! this is my favorite fanfic and its only 1 chapter!!
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Reviewed By: jordy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 14:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
awesome fic there arent any kagome/koga fics i think that kagome should fall in love with koga that would be like sooo kool
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Reviewed By: DarkestDreams [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 07:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great Work! Really would like this story to continue. i'm litterally trying not to break the computer because of my on stop cheaking to see if an update was done on this. Please update soon... I BEG OF UUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly enjoyed reading this fic. But please expand on your ideas, it really does not hurt to have a long chapter; trust me on that. All it does, it is add more to the setting and adds more detail to characters. So, try to add a little more instinct, check a few facts (for ex. : they did not have "beds" back then, they had futons) but other than that awsome and please hurry with the next chapter. ~Amaya Gin Kagome
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