| "A Certain Clarity" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ebonyguitarchic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2010 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad I came across this fic. A little late to the party but better now than never. The storyline was excellent full of twist and turns that were unexpected. I would have liked to seen some of the parts fleshed out a bit since your detail orientated writing was so good. The only con I have is lack of breaks between scenes. Perhaps and extra bit of space or symbol of some type so readers don't get confused so easily. Other than that two thumbs way way up!
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Reviewed By: Honey Sue [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 00:35 CDT
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Wow! this fic is GREAT! i was kinda sad when you make saitou dead...but i'm glad he's not really dead!Its very twisted and i like it...please make a sequel! there's so less saitou/sano fics! Anyway your've an amazing writer!*double thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: May 01, 2005 00:51 CDT
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My lord. That was so awsome. I almost stopped reading cause I thought you killed off the old cop but I'm glad I finished it. A two in the morning. Thank You. DK;)
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Title: Absolutly Fantastic
Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really fabulous. It had a nice tight plot tha moved merrily along. It kept you guessing and you dropped hints so cleverly that I had to re-read it to catch everything. The romance was perfect, you built it up beliveably from the initail denial to them both coming together in a realistic manner. The sex scenes were well done, just enough to catch you and hold you, without it taking over the story. Wonderful job.
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Reviewed By: feklar On: November 23, 2003 22:23 CST
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I really enjoyed this. I liked how Sano slowly came around to realizing his feelings. The use of the wet dreams to show this was quite fun. ;-) Though being a perv, I'd always like more lemon. I particularly liked that there was a complex plot surrounding the love story. The teasing ambiguity of the cult leaders' characters up until the end of the story was especially well done. I do hope you write more fic soon.
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Reviewed By: Polka Dot On: July 25, 2003 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this, it was very twisted. The only thing that irked me a little was trying to figure out how events coincided since we saw Sano's perspective followed by chou's and they overlapped. |
Reviewed By: Zera On: June 28, 2003 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes... I just read some other reviews and I would like you to do a sequal also. I know you can do it... and I hope you will. (^-^)Thanks... |
Reviewed By: Zera On: June 28, 2003 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Crying her eye's out* I loved it! It was sweet, romantic... and I loved it. It was one of the best stories I have ever read. This is now one of my favorites. Your such a wonderful, amazing... a great writer! Thank-you for the story, and once again... I LOVED IT!!!!! (^-^) |
Reviewed By: chris On: June 07, 2003 04:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... never figured on saitou feeling that way. he he he... kinda reminds me a little of slam dunk's kitsune and partner... he he he.. good one. though. unique. first time i came across someone daring enough to feature a cult and all the grisly little details and not to mention the m/m pairings. |
Reviewed By: Az On: May 09, 2003 06:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOO HOO!!!
Great job! :)
I agree with other other reviewers...write more, please! :) |
Reviewed By: Googuru no Shoujo On: May 06, 2003 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, beautiful, beautiful story! I just absolutly loved it!! ^__^ Please, please consider writing a sequal. This is such a lovely story. |
Reviewed By: the chibi what lurks On: May 05, 2003 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with Googuru! Good things are worth waiting for. So, I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter!
There are too few Saitou/Sano stories out there, and I totally think they're a great couple. :) Keep up the fabulousness! |
Reviewed By: Googuru no Shoujo On: March 10, 2003 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, your almost done. Can't wait to read the last chapter. I really think you should consider doing a sequal!! |
Reviewed By: Googuru no Shoujo On: March 10, 2003 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, your almost done. Can't wait to read the last chapter. I really think you should consider doing a sequal!! |
Reviewed By: Googuru no Shoujo On: March 10, 2003 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome, love this fic! Please update/continue!
And to Karou27 who is bitching about the slow updates, stop. Most people have lives, other than writing fanfiction and being on the net all day (myself, NOT included). So chill out and be paitent. "Good things happen to those who wait" (Random anime quote) |
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