| "Life's Prison: A Thief's Goal" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Title: chapt.3
Reviewed By: kagome012 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 04:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ong i cried
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Reviewed By: EnV [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
try hiei!! hes soo hot!
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Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 11:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's going great the way it is.
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Reviewed By: Insane On: September 18, 2005 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Try a three some with Kagome, Kurama, and Kuronue
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Title: Chap 16
Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 11:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is the best chapter yet. It was very well written and thought out. You blended everything together very nicely. Very good job. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (nsi) On: September 12, 2005 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So your starting to tie it together more with yuyu.. coolio. And i wonder what the future chapters will hold to keep it rolling. I guess now we will be n the yuyu world where as we were in the inu world. Hm, wonder if she will meet any other members before the group was formed or if they will find her on a mission or something. Can't wait to see Youko's reaction as well as Kagome's... ^_~
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Title: chap 17
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 22:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (nsi) On: September 03, 2005 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG YOUR KILLIN ME HERE. Really good story plot, but ahhh. Poor Kuronue. It's so sad. And whats with the black blossom. Guess we'll find out. Keep up the good work... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (nsi) On: August 29, 2005 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no. Dose his mean that Kuronue will die ebfore hey are together? Then what? Oh, my poor little brain. Well keep up the good work... ^_~
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Reviewed By: og On: August 28, 2005 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a really great writer. There are some areas that are confusing, and I wish I could point them out, but it would be hard without a hard copy to refer to. Just know that I am really enjoying this story. I hope you give it a happy ending!
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Title: chap 15
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 02:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (nsi) On: August 23, 2005 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay,the finaly met up. Can't wait to see how youko will take her and sess interacting and i wonder if sess knows what happened to her and all. Keep up the good work... ^_~
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (not signed in) On: August 18, 2005 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. I was expecting something completely diff. But thats a good thing. I can see you are setting up a deepening plot and i can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: August 17, 2005 13:11 CDT
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WOW this is a great story i love it soooooooo much and i cant wait to see what happends next so update it really soon ok thanks tootles.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was nice but short please continue *S*
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