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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2009 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The scary part is, I could see him doing this. Killing Rin every time she doesn't meet his expectations when it's him that hasn't, but needs to change. This piece is scary in a sad way. I don't really know how to feel about this, but I like it. Eww... *adds to favorites anyway*
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Reviewed By: LizLuvsPink [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2008 23:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice
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Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 13:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually can't stand sad endings, but I am inexpicably drawn to this story. It's so dark, but I just want to hold it in a corner and pet it. I can just imagine Sesshoumaru staring at Rin, calmly explaining that the cycle will continue thusly until she gets it right. Wow. Again, another dark mark on my soul and another story well written.
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Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2005 00:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Ack! I wanted to smack him silly! Because that is what you do so something at this broken, and he clearly is. :shakes head: Poor Rin. I bet she regrets following him, trusting him, loving him now. You write dark well.
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Title: Lady Raven
Reviewed By: Lady Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So dark, and sorrowful. He finds her over and over agine,but she is never right. He can't leave her alone, can't live without her, but always kills her over and over agine. And She knows. She knows that he will keep doing this over and over and she just wants it to stop, but he can't, not till she's real Rin, the first Rin.
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Reviewed By: CatDaemon_Assassin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 15:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. Loved it. Nice and Dark
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Reviewed By: Fox flame not signed in On: May 31, 2005 17:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
it was a very sad story, though once again your writing is superb. I am not a huge fan of Sess/Rin, but i just had to read it because you wrote it =]. please continue writing- im running out of good stories to read now a days...this lightened up my day,(though its a dark story, ironic ne?) i just love reading a well written piece of work, sad or not...you gave me something to read!!thank you lol hahahahah....fox
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Reviewed By: Lavender [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 13:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
So this is where serial killers come from *shudders* Very creepy. Very dark. Am now wondering if there is something wrong with me for liking such twisted stuff. *adds this to her favorites*
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