| "What you don't know can change you" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
Title: What You Don't Know Can Change You
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 20:47 CDT
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please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please continue the fic, I luv it so much! please please please!!!!!! update please! I'll give you a cookie!
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Title: What You Don't Know Can Change You
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 17:15 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: noooooooooo
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: September 30, 2005 17:43 CDT
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please continue, i want to know how this all works out.
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Reviewed By: Amantes2 On: September 30, 2005 13:48 CDT
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What, delete the fic??? I am not about to let you delete this fic, I will fight to keep this fic up, and I will not stop until it is kept!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!1500 characterz |
Title: What You Don't Know Can Change You
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 14:50 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl (nli) On: September 22, 2005 18:51 CDT
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so...it took you eight chapters to get to the good stuff? and I thought the fic was already interesting. Well...update again soon please
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Title: What You Don't Know Can Change You
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 15:20 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Knight2 On: September 17, 2005 12:31 CDT
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Very dramatic things have happened, I'm curious what happens next. I hope you update soon.
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Title: What You Don't Know Can Change You
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 20:52 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: What You Don't Know Can Change You
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 22:06 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: July 21, 2005 13:17 CDT
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wow, i just loove ur story!!!! Why did kei die, at first i was all like she isn't realy dead, but now, im all boohoo
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl(nli) On: July 20, 2005 19:14 CDT
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good luck! good chappie, update soon please
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 10:14 CDT
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two of my fav things in one ^^ blood and gore, and romance. ^^ update soon pleae.
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Reviewed By: kk On: June 28, 2005 23:06 CDT
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i was crying like shit once Inuyasha started talking to her while she was dead. Oh shit that was sad, he dropped his spell for her shit i need to stop crying
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Title: I now hate your guts. . .
Reviewed By: Amantes2 On: June 28, 2005 22:55 CDT
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You said Kei WASN'T gonna be rapped. . . You better be planning on a good chapter that brings her back some how and like have her kill you. . . Yes, I hate your guts. . .
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Title: What You Don't Know Can Change You
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 19:38 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: What You Don't Know Can Change You
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 23:42 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Amantes2 On: June 14, 2005 06:12 CDT
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Ahhh, damn exams I almost failed my math. I wouldn't say the chapter sucked though, I liked it.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 21:44 CDT
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she's missing!! no! oh wait, I know why ^_^ I'm glad the dude wasnt' Koga, thanx for clearing that up, he's not my favorite character, but I don't hate him either. update soon please. ja!
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Reviewed By: Amantes2 On: June 09, 2005 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
X.X Same sex? As in homosexuallity?? Yea, well give a fair warning when you do a lemon on that. Hot warter if it is muscel tensions, cold for bone pain. I fell you are right about the age of characters in the lemons, thats what I do in my storys. I don't really use AU in my storys, I just increace the time period so that the charaters are 18 and over. If you want to read my partner or my work, go to fanfiction.net and look for the screen name "Amantes" I have two stories, Music row and The blizzard, neither are past chapter 2. My parter has one stroy out but three stories all together her story is called Baby Love, it is a really good story.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 19:58 CDT
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it's ok, alot of things make my brain hurt. yaois are always fun....so no prob there. If you're having chest and back and breathing problems I recomend a steam. Steam up your bathroom by closing the doors and windows then turn all hot water faucets in there and let it get all steamy. That's what my mommy did for me and my brother before I got my inhaler. hope you get better. ja!
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Reviewed By: Amantes2 On: June 06, 2005 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IOuch, out of one peice of trouble, right into another, thats just plain cold hearted you know that. I am starting to see a resimbalance in this and secrets and changes. Yea, its the demon thing. =/
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 06:52 CDT
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yay! cookie ^_^ X.X k, well, wait, I thought that Naraku was evil pure unloving evil....I mean, he did turn Katara evil but still....Ga!!!! was the dude that tried to rape her Koga? I thought he wuz a good guy....all this thinking is making my brain hurt. @.@ so, update soon please.
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Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: June 05, 2005 22:06 CDT
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u r right i wouldn't want to be saved by him!
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Reviewed By: Amantes-2 On: May 31, 2005 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you have that guy even try to rape Kei, I'll kill you. . . Well, not really, but still, I can't take a story where a girl is attacked after what has happend to my friend, give a fair wanring in next chapter so I can skip that part. Well I really like the story though, I think is ia really good
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 18:25 CDT
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ha! I got first review....sorry, I was having a weird moment (when am I not?)My question: Do they still have their demon stuffs about them? Either that dude is gonna kidnap her, rape or a combination of the two. Or it's an old friend playing a very mean and not funny trick on her. whelps, update soon. ja ne
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