| "The Right kind of Wrong" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: Indira again On: January 06, 2002 08:52 CST
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE!! DAMN IT!!
I WANT TO SEE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
DO IT! DO IT!
sorry, I just want to read more of your story.
kisses from Indira from Holland |
Reviewed By: Demon Caller 2002 On: January 06, 2002 07:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow this story is so good next chap ASAP pretty please wid loads of sugar on top! |
Reviewed By: Indira from Holland On: January 05, 2002 06:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your a good writer!
I. WANT. MORE!
Update your fic soon, I love it.
Vegeta is sooooooooo sweet! (little ooc, but cute)
Write fast! (speedie) |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: January 05, 2002 03:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A stroll on the beach. How romantic those two can be. They were meant for each other. I've enjoyed reading your recent chapters. How much do I want to bet Y-chan is still gonna try and get Bulma back. Any way good job with this story. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 03, 2002 05:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the last 2 chapters and all I have to say is WOW!! How romantic. I have tears in my eyes. I honestly believe that if all the men on earth were like Veggie, there would be no such thing as PMS. I'd be in a good mood 24/7. Peace. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2002 03:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAHHHHHH! Vegeta is sooo sweet! I think I'm going to cry. Anyway as you guessed I loved this chapter. Can't wait for the next one. |
Reviewed By: trunksgurl On: January 02, 2002 21:41 CST
Comment/Review:
i loved the two chappys i just read i can't wait till u update next well until next time bye!
~trunksgurl~ |
Reviewed By: Misty On: January 02, 2002 21:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Yeah, I love this ficcie!!! I like Veggia being OOC cause it makes him a sweetheart. (If anyone else says anything about it tell them it is an A/U and you can make him purple if you want!!) I can't wait for more, and my Hentai mind is ready for the lemony dessert. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2002 13:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What is it with you and cliffhangers? Anyway loved the chapter and as you already know I'll be waiting for the next one. |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: January 01, 2002 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This whole thing sux, JUST KIDDING, This epic is great, can't wait for the next upcoming chapters. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 01, 2002 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeez, I can't believe Bulma's still thinking about Yamucha when she's got Veggie's attention. Someone needs to slap some sense into that girl, and I hope it happens in the next chappie. Happy New Year |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2002 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAHHHHH! Poor Vegeta! Just when he finds the girl for him, she's still hung up on a loser like Yamucha. Ugh! Anyway I hope it all turns out okay in the end. I can't wait to see what Vegeta has in store for this date. Waiting for the next chapter. Oh, and Happy New Years! |
Reviewed By: mizu megami On: January 01, 2002 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!must...read...MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!! ::runs around going mad:: |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2001 03:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Another great chapter. I admit I don't like the idea of Bulma still having any kind of feelings for Yamucha but it does make it more realistic this way. Great job. See you next chapter. Oh, and thanks for all the great reviews you gave my stories. |
Reviewed By: trunksgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2001 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the two chappys i just read i can't wait for more
~trunksgurl~ |
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