| "The Right kind of Wrong" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: December 26, 2001 05:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Firaga, do you want a medal or something? That's the 3rd update in less than 24 hrs (I'm not complaining just pleasantly surprised). Anyway, I can't wait to see how their date goes. I'm kind've excited for them which proves I have no life *growls to herself*. I won't be greedy and ask that you put out another chapter right away, it's the holidays. So have some fun and do it when you can. Take care. |
Reviewed By: trunksgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2001 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was like the best most original b/v story i've ever read i really like it and i can't wait for the next chappy to cojme out if you can e-mail me when u update my e-mail address is : mousey7891@hotmail.com, well keep up the awesome writing
~Trunksgurl~ |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2001 02:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. I liked it. Can't wait for the next chapter. I want to say though that I love your disclaimers. They're all very funny. Anyway can't wait for the next disclaim- ur... I mean... chapter ;). |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 23, 2001 00:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Maybe that girl with the glasses will set Yamucha straight. I can't wait to read what happens between B/V on their first date. Peace and Merry Xmas. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 18, 2001 03:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chapter. Things are heating up between B/V. I can't believe Yamucha begging her to take him back. He's got about as much pride as I have money in the bank. Oh well, I'll be waiting for the next chapter cause I know a lemon is coming (hehe), and I've read your lemons *starts to drool*. Till later. Peace |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2001 19:13 CST
Comment/Review:
This such a cute story. I can't wait for the next Chapter. |
Reviewed By: Pimpdaddyz On: December 17, 2001 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want more! rally god. Very, very creative. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 17, 2001 04:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah yes, this is my idea of Yuletide Cheer-Yamucha getting a dressing down in public. GO BULMA!! Oh, you too Firaga. Super chapter. |
Reviewed By: Lazereth On: December 17, 2001 04:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More! more! more! Keep writing and i'll keep reading. it is such an awesome fanfic! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 15, 2001 03:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew! I was finally able to sit down and check out this story. For the last 10 days I've been busy going broke at the malls (it's that time of year again). This fic is just great. It reminds me so much of my high school days that I have to lol. Poor Yamucha-I think he's about to get an enema in the form of Bulma's foot. Anyway, now that I'm thru shopping I'll be safetly tucked away at home waiting for the next chapter. Good job Firaga! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Raziel the Vampire Saiyan On: December 15, 2001 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like ur fic very much. i really would like if u could finish this story fast. thank u for reading.
the vampire saiyan |
Reviewed By: majinsk8rvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2001 23:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAHHHH!! This fic is kewl!! I want to read more of the chapters cuz the story reflects on my peers in my high school!! Yeah!! |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2001 05:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Susan! where are you?! :) please review! |
Reviewed By: Kitanna the saijin On: December 10, 2001 12:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I WANT MORE!!!::runs around in a circle::I like your fic..pretty good..more please::holds out a empty plate:: |
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