| "Generation Lost" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: beanking On: September 16, 2004 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you off your rocker. This NEED'S to be updated Asap. You've give Return how many more chapters while the Generation has been left to fester. Something has to done about that!!! Now that's been said I feel much better.
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Reviewed By: Barrakketh On: June 14, 2004 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DJ On: January 13, 2004 02:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That organic tech must have lost a few intelligence points since the last chapter, where it seemed to actually interact with him rather than the "Strong-arm" tactics that is only causing resentment. ' If it wants Ranma to accept the role, it should just offer compromises and deals so that he willingly accepts it. Explicitly offering to fix brain damage and making it possible to successfully complete the foolish ways of training in the Genma/Amazon style like exposing oneself to radiation to become gain radiation resistance or exposure to machine gun fire to become bullet proof. Seriously, if the organic tech offered the super-computer hacker ability of the eye of Goku of Midnight Eye and his telescoping and blast-shooting battlestaff, Ranma might have a far less adversarial relationship with it.
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Reviewed By: Taktuk On: May 23, 2003 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ibid.
Anyway, other than what was mentioned previously, this fic is positively wonderful and junk like that. Sleep is over-rated. |
Reviewed By: Me On: December 28, 2002 09:24 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, GREAT STORY, BUT WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?
PLEASE HURRY AND GET IT FINISHED. I LIKE YOUR OTHER WORK TO BY THE WAY.
Now...
NEXT CHAPTER
NEXT CHAPTER
NEXT CHAPTER
NEXT CHAPTER
NEXT CHAPTER
NEXT CHAPTER
NEXT CHAPTER
NEXT CHAPTER |
Reviewed By: mpm100 On: September 24, 2002 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice work. You should reread the thing and fix the spelling errors for example what should be 'Calash' is written as 'Clash' quite often.
Very different storyline from the average Ranma fic. It *almost* got a 10 for originality. But I'm a harsh critic (laf).
The style of writting changes over the course of the fic, some good some bad. That's why it got the five.
I hope to see the fic's conclusion soon. |
Reviewed By: Subspace000 On: September 07, 2002 06:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice fic, just wish that chapters would come out more frequently, but i can't really do much about that. I also think that Ranma should get some more tech skills, cause if not later on he's gonna get trashed. And maybe throw in a few more of the Wrecking Crew? |
Reviewed By: Joe Kellogg On: May 30, 2002 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story but you need to go over the spelling just read it aloud and you will see what I mean. |
Reviewed By: Rogue1615 On: January 20, 2002 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't have time for a full review but are you ever going to have ranma get any technical skills. Cause with only his marthial arts he is severly outclassed. Remember in a fight he will do anything to win. And i think that includes learning how to program his template.
Good luck with the rest.
Rogue1615 |
