| "Andante Andante" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 10:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was interesting. I think it was a really great idea to re-enact their greatest moment together to remember what they had or can have. The role reversal was also a good idea because it showed how much Trowa trusted him and wanted to remember him.
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 03:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lovely. You have a gift for writing. I hope to see your stories more often.
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 17:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very well written, and the song was perfect for the type of emotions you were going for. Beautiful and poignant. Awesome job. :o)
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Reviewed By: inulover (not logged in) On: June 01, 2005 01:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
blueit was very touching and i just love when u write something like this..i really tought that u did a great job with taking what u did from the original story and making it ur own..i thought that this was a good story and that Q-man and Trowa were in character.Good job with this.I cried with the ending. The poem was wonderful and i think that u did a great job in picking it and puting it in the story as u did.. hope to see somethime like this again from u and update ur other things soon..have fun with writting...ja ne..^__^
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