| "The Walk Home" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: Not bad
Reviewed By: KinkyGeek On: September 27, 2015 19:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It wasn't bad lots of spelling and grammar issues. The one thing I
didn't like AT ALL was the little authors note of gross. Like
seriously? If you think it's gross don't write it. It took me
completely out of the story and I almost stopped reading.
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Title: didi
Reviewed By: dido and On: August 23, 2013 12:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this was your first lemon I can't belive it , you wrote it really good keep on the good work |
Title: ^_^ wow ^_^
Reviewed By: MangaFreak957 On: April 04, 2013 21:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm amazed..... I mean, wow...... No clue what a "lemon" is supposed to be, but whatever... for your first, you seem to know an awful lot about this kinda stuff.... |
Reviewed By: Didix3 On: June 13, 2011 11:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it! I think you write really well lemons! Hehe... :) KyoxTohru make the best couple EVER! :D |
Reviewed By: kana sukoi On: July 09, 2007 14:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was alright very fun and I luffed the last sentence at the end, it was funny. you might wannta work on your spelling though.....
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: CrystalEyedYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 00:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm new to Fruits Basket too and I really like it so far, I haven't watched the anime yet but I will soon. I really want Tohru to end up with Kyo in the end cause I love cats and I love him, anywayz.... Great First lemon! I haven't written a lemon yet and when I do, I doubt it'll be any good. You did great! Write more soon!! ~Annie~
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Reviewed By: b On: July 20, 2006 12:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it ^_^
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Reviewed By: laredith On: February 05, 2006 16:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a cute story but it would be easier to read if you did some editing because there are a number of typos. Update soon with a sequel perhaps?
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Reviewed By: Klove0511 On: September 11, 2005 13:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I really liked this story. It's one of the few Kyo/Tohru pairings I've found. I thought some of the dialogue was kinda awkward, but other then that, I have no complaints.
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Reviewed By: TorhuLuV_ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 15:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv it i hope you write more hehehehehe!Ok well nice story and have a nice day!No presure!^_~
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: freezetag On: July 25, 2005 20:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I love lemons, and I noticed my sisters lemon "The walk home" Posted on the website FINALLY! I'm glad you Got it posted lex! ^_^ Lub u lots. Cas PS Write another, and i'll write one 2!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love(not logged in) On: July 20, 2005 18:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was good! I'm new to FB so I'm not sure what parring I like better. so I'm trying all things out. keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: zaccely [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 14:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this a really good fic. I am surprised for it being your first lemon? I did see a few spelling errors, thought from the looks of them they were merely typos. ^_^ It was good. I think you should write another one. Like, with Kyo and Tohru-kun again. At the house though, and maybe they'd get caught by Sensei or something. That'd be funny, cause then Sensei could slip some of "novels" into Kyo's bedroom with a note saying, "have more fun next time" zaccely
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Title: woo
Reviewed By: Jyurian Itsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 21:32 PDT
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed it. ^^ There were some typos, sure, but it wasn't like I couldn't understand it. Some people have sych bad grammar and so many typos you can't tell what's happening.
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Title: The Walk Home
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 12:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS YOUR FIRST LEMON?! That was waaaay good. And I totally agree with that author's note ("lapping up her juices"). That is a gross!! I still can't help but read this stuff anyway. The more I read the more I want to read, but that still doesn't mean that I don't think it's disguisting sounding. C'est degoutant! Well...I got to get going now. Can't wait to read more of your stories! ^-^ Tchao!~
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