"Without Me" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Update soon! Seriously! Reviewed By: Sour Akio [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 21:53 CST Comment/Review: You updated this in school? ^^ Awesome. Please please PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I can't wait to see what ideas you've had... -Sour
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Title: Seems good! Reviewed By: Sour Akio [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 21:50 CST Comment/Review: ^-^ I like how you started right off the bat! This chapter was kind of short, but it seemed pretty good to me! ^-^ A suggestion: Uhm... use more imagery? -Sour
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Reviewed By: shadow_magic [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 13:44 CDT Comment/Review: sorry it's taken me long to write you a review. great story can't wait for the next chapter and to see what it would be like without Yugi.
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Reviewed By: Scorpia250 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 07:07 CDT Comment/Review: um hello *blushes* I really like the idea behind this story and um can't wait for the next chappy *blushes*. Um but I have one teeny weeny correction. You say that Tenshi means 'love'. Well it does but it origanally means Angel *blushes* so yes Tenshi means love if you use it for your lover or BF/GF. *blushes* I'm so sorry *hangs head* i don't mean to hurt your feelings. *stares at floor while having hands clasped behind her back* so yes. i um can't wait for your next chapter and I'm going to put you on my favorites list. Syonarra *Throws head down in a bow before running away and hiding under a big rock to wait for next chapter* Scorpia #-_-#
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Reviewed By: jaq On: June 04, 2005 01:25 CDT Comment/Review: I wonder what it would be like with out Yugi, it's so hard to imagine, hope to see conclusion soon.
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