| "Vindaloo Magic" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Damien
Reviewed By: WhiteWolfOfIce On: September 29, 2005 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay for the Damein thing it comes from a movie where the kid is turned into a bad child and starts to kill his parents and other people off. Hmm bloody mess...anyway I loved the story, a Voodoo doll! I wouldn't of thought of that, veyr funny again I must say. *giggles*
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Reviewed By: Jodine16(not logged in) On: July 05, 2005 12:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Haha, that was great. The end of chater six was very hot! Let's see, for chapter 4, um I think you got the name Daimen from Ocean's Eleven/Twelve, and the movie you were refering to was the Exorsist
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 04:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Has fallen over laughing.* Golden Dragon: Since my hikari is distracted...This was a cute, yet funny fiction. Our only comment is that Yami's Dark Magician should be named Enrique, but being that this is a comedy, that would totally defeat the purpose of mentioning his name. Still, a nice little set of twists at the end, the hacker conspiracy, the regenerating book, the good use of the dolls. All in all, a highly enjoyable story. HD: YAMI WAS SO OOC!! *Falls over laughing again.* And Kaiba! Dear Ra, Kaiba! *Goes back into incoherent laughter.* GD: ...She really liked this.
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Title: i know
Reviewed By: bluelilly1928 lazy to log on On: June 29, 2005 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one i love the story its great keep wrighting ans two the movie that mokuba is talking about in chapter 4 is The Exorcist / i hope i spelt that right /
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 15:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I found this very entertaining and funny. I can't beleive that Kaiba was so dense he couldn't believe in magic. Pleaes update soon!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 15:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is just so amusing my family thinks I am crazy for laughing so hard thank goodness I didn't read this at work. Great job I love it.
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Title: Love it love you
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was laughing so hard I couldn't believe it. The Omen and the Exorcist are two of my favorite books. I saw the Omen but not the exorcist. Please keep upadting I absolutely love this.
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Reviewed By: Jodine16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 07:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOYY CRAP THAT WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And did Yami ever go to that mental institute, cause I don't think I've ever reada fic were he calls the Dark Magican 'Bob.' But, anyway, UPDATE SOON!!!! I really want to read what Joey does to Seto after finding out who the brunets wants!!
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Randa On: June 06, 2005 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Laughs like an insane person and falls off chair* LOL! That was the funniest chapter yet! Bet that was a shocker for Joey in the chapter... hehehehe...
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kaiba he has no clue what hit him. It's just too funny! Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: Katsuya Kaiba On: June 05, 2005 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must do more! I love this story and I can't wait to see what brews up next!
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just too funny. Poor Kaiba, I hope Joey manages to make it better. Update soon.
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope Joey didn't hurt Kaiba too badly, I'm cringing from where he poked him and I'm a girl. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Randa On: June 02, 2005 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! I just about fell off my chair (literally!) laughing! That was one of the funniest things I've read in such a long time! Hahahahahaha! *Giggles hysterically* Anyhow, I wonder what plans Joey has up his sleeve now that he knows the Voodoo Dolls work... :P Update soon!
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