| "Unrequited Desires" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Miko Vampire On: September 14, 2010 04:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE THIS, I WANT TOO SEE WHAT SEPH WILL DO WHEN CLOUD COMES BACK TOO HIM WITH ALL HIS MEMORIES AND DEMANDS ANSWERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Honestly
Reviewed By: HonestToBlob On: August 31, 2009 08:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Out of the comments I've read, and if I am not mistaken. I am the only one that has actually stated that I want Zack and Cloud. I'm only on the 8th chapter right now so maybe in the future I'll change my mind. But damn. I may love you but you have some thinking to do if you just go around killing my friends and shit. I mean fuck. Bad Sephy. Maybe he just needs a good time out. As for cloud. I think maybe he has a problem with deciding shit. It even confuses the hell out of you sometimes. Like "DAMN CLOUD WTF" =3 Yuffie's dead... as far as I know... Dunno if thats good. Sephy's jealous.... Boo hoo someone else tapped that sweet ass. I'm actually inspired to write a story now. One I'm been neglecting... Had a dream about maybe a couple of weeks ago.. Shit you care... Anyway. I love this story though. Kinda tired because I've been reading it since 9 PM...... It is now 7 AM... Help me I've lost my mind... -3 Much love and write more.. I know this story is old for you but dammit chika! PLEASE THE FANS!! Or just me rather... o.o
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Reviewed By: Jess1293 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 23:52 CST
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wow, that was cool! hope you get another chapter up soon
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Title: Perfect.
Reviewed By: veta91 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just wonderful. I've read every chapter so far, and just dying for more. This story is captivating and draws you in. It's so orginal and thought threw. This has less plot holes then most actual animes/cartoons/movies! I hope there's a new chapter soon, and if you have the full story or something like that on another site, please email me the link at vegetakoga91@yahoo.com. I love all the indecivness cloud has, and I hope he ends up with sephy to be honest! Zack isn't bad himself though, right? ;)
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Reviewed By: Mad Dawg On: July 05, 2006 17:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know what would be good? Catagorizng your story so it can be filtered out by the few straight people left.
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Reviewed By: Yit-Ha On: April 23, 2006 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Woot! You have a really interesting fic going here. Please continue soon, it's like how FFVII was supposed to go. Cloud's fickleness can get a bit repetitive, but other than that, I like it! (Uh, I'd kinda like it if Cloud ended up with Seph in the end, but that's just me.)
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: SuijiDL On: April 19, 2006 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I'm so glad I went back to AFF.net and read your profile...I was afraid I was never going to see this story again. The closer and closer it gets to Cloud remembering Seph killing everyone, the more excited I get. I enjoyed how you threw in that little bit with Cloud's mom. It seems like she gets over looked other fics that talk about the past, even in the game, I don't thnik you could even talk to her. As odd as it is, that little bit was probably my favorite part of chapter 17.
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Reviewed By: V3 Strife On: February 12, 2006 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the plot, fresh ideas and also the pairing. SephirothCloud or ZackCloud. I like all of them so it'll be kinda hard deciding which one Cloud will be ending with.... But please, no more killing? Although if it's necessary... go for it!
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Reviewed By: nirvanna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 11:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was just perfect. I really loved it! My favourite from ff!!! Please write more!!!
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Reviewed By: one-winged-shinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 21:03 CDT
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I LOVE THIS FIC SOOOOO MUCH!! wanna know how much i love it? I only read 1x2 fics, this is the only fic I make an exception for that's how good it is!!!! update and buy urself loads of ice cream for doing such a great job!!
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Reviewed By: Toonsie On: July 01, 2005 06:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NEED to read more
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