| "Ice Ice Baby" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: YamiYaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am impressed. You're style is good, albeit short. The plot line has been similarly done, but it is still good. The OC has personality and is not just another random sex toy. Keep writing please!
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Title: Heh
Reviewed By: New_Blue_Zinthos On: June 20, 2005 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite entertaining. I like what you've done so far. Good descriptions, a fun read. The Skye / Slade convo (in chap 4) made me chuckle. Keep them coming. One downside (to me) is the shortness of each chapter. There seems to be so much more that could be said. If you could, make the chapters a bit longer. Other than that, an excellent start, looking forward to an equally excellent finish.
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Reviewed By: tootles On: June 18, 2005 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story, I bet you can tell.
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Title: This is damn good
Reviewed By: Just-A-Random-Guy On: June 18, 2005 04:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thats all I can say Keep it going Great stuff
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