| "Nazo ni michiteiru" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 15:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL! Nice story! I like where the end half of his sentance slipped out. Keep up the good work an update soon, please!
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Title: pls update!
Reviewed By: hend [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its nice!good idea!!but PLS UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: MzEvilBlossoms [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 09:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Well done! This first chappie has great talent of a great author! I really liked it! So thank you for a nice read! ^_^ Wanting to read way MORE from YOU!!! Bye, MzEvilBlossoms (aka Rapunzel) xxx P.S. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! ^_^
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: pure hope [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 10:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GR8 BEGINING PLEASE UPDATE SOON and to fallen_angel u cant just hav a Hentai fic or any kind of fic wif out a plot dats wat this chappi is (correct me if im wrong) any way ur story is gr8 so far well done ur a gr8 author ~^_^~
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Title: hhhmmm...
Reviewed By: fallen_heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
IS THIS REALY A HENTAI FIC!!!!if your planning to be a real hentai fic writer do better than that!!!
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