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| "Musouka ~ Dare to Dream" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] | Reviewed By: Lady Ice [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 15:22 CST
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Hi Aspendragon! Thank you so much for writing this fic! I absolutely love it so much that every time that you updated, I stopped to read it! MY WRITING IS A PIECE OF DOG CRAP COMPARED TO YOURS! I can't wait to read the rest. Eriko is awesome! I have stolen her name to use on my myspace. Please check it out. www.myspace.com/timid_tigress. I hope you like. Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: Sonyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there i just had to put this in. i LOVE!!!! this story i think this is the best story i ever read. it took me i think at least over 2 weeks to read everything. but it was awsome to reed nonetheless i'm looking orwazrd to eading the next chapter. and i ithink that it stinks that your vactions were cut in half. thats a big bummer. but take your time and get what you can done. just dont take forever. lol ^_^ well update soon. Ja Ne =^_^= Oh, And i Suppirt ErikoXKyo AAAALLLLLLLLLL THE WAY!! =^_^= Bye.
| Reviewed By: chiisai tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DOOD!!! This is possible the best fanfic I've EVER read in my life!!! You're such a talented writer and I read your bio and you're younger than me! It's not fair but, oh well...I adore your fan art as well!!! Did I mention you are SO awesomely talented? It took me a few days to read this entire story so far and you're not done writing it...WOW! That just means more good things to come, ne? KYO/ERIKO FOREVER!!! (hopefully...^^U) Whoot, this fic rocks my socks! Peace.
| Reviewed By: Kiki14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. How old are you? You write like a very good novelist. At first I wasn't for the idea of yet another zodiac/outsider person. Because in most fanfics it doesn't turn out well. But, you never cease to amaze me. I have to say I got a little upset because... even though usually I'm a Tohru/Kyo fan(and of course NEVER a Yuki/Tohru fan, not that I hate the pairing... it just doesn't fit. Or rather, fits to well.) I did enjoy the Eriko/Kyo pairing, a lot. But, I like how your keeping it real, and hey, I don't know, maybe you'll decide to in the end put Eriko and Kyo back together. Or maybe not. Either way I'm sure you'll do a great job. I really liked that tense moment between Kyo and Eriko, but it doesn't seem like a definate breakup yet. Also, for two people being in a relationship they haven't been kissing or anything a lot.Sounds like nothing during the exams.(though I can understand why) and very little before and especially after. I'd like to think about what Kyo thinks about all this you know? It seems like fate that the cat and fox to be together. Also, was it actually the heat that set the two lovers off, or a mix between that and Eriko not wanting Kyo to be too upset when she leaves. Wow, so many questions...I wonder if you will even answer them. Lol. Hope you do and I LOVE your fan fic! Keep up the good work and UPDATE! Woot, and Toodles!
| Reviewed By: kiki14 On: July 06, 2005 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your fan fic. It is not the first I've seen with another family with a similar curse. But it's the first I've seen that goes into such detail, and lasts as long as it has so far. I liked it so much I dedicated two and a half days to reading it. (I could have read all of it in one day if my mom would have let me...*sigh*) I really like the sketch of the characters, or well, most of them. Though, at first I was confused as to whether Akito was actually a girl or not, now I get it. I don't get whats wrong with the Kitsune book, but I guess I'll just wait. I also really like the pairing, at first I was iffy because I'm a dedicated Tohru/Kyo fan, but I like your idea a lot. Though I do hope Yuki and Tohru find their one true loves... ok, I'm more concerned about Tohru. (To tell the truth, I never really liked Yuki.) Ok, well now I've got to go, so bye! Update soon!
| Title: Hi!
Reviewed By: Jenny B. On: June 19, 2005 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there. I still love your story. It's so cute, and funny. I hope you write more soon. Chao!
| Title: Hello you!
Reviewed By: Jenny B. On: June 15, 2005 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love your story. I just can't get enough of it! Oh, you can read my story Why Me?. I don't like it, but a few people do. I'm already working on the second chapter right now. I hope you like my story. Bye. -Jen.
| Title: Hi.
Reviewed By: Jenny B. On: June 08, 2005 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. I love your chapters. They are wonderful. I hope you write some more really soon. Write more. -Jen
| Title: OMG!!!!!
Reviewed By: KaTiEcAtLyOnS On: June 05, 2005 16:23 CDT
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OMG I LOVE THIS FANFICTION SOOOOO MUCH NOT TO SEXUAL NOT TO VIOLENT!!!! I CANT BELEVE IT WAS SO GOOD!!!!!!! THAT WAS GREAT!!!! I HAVENT READ THE ENDING YET BUT IT WAS STILL AWSOME!!!!
| Title: Hi!
Reviewed By: Jenny Ball On: June 02, 2005 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi there! I just love this fan fic! It made me laugh, cry, blush, get really hyper! I really hope you will continue with this story or make a sequel to it! I don't remember when a Fruits Basket fan fic was so great! If I could go to any number with the ratings, and if there was a button with the words: Off the charts, on it, I would choose OFF the charts for all of them. It is just the stupendioud thing I ever read! The Kyo and Eriko pairing was great! I haven't completely read the entire fan fic yet, but I will. It's just the best thing I ever read! I haven't ever blushed like this ever. See? That's how much I like the pairings in this fan fic. Hahahaha. I'm making Kyo blush. OW! Don't punch me Kyo! I'm writing here! Anyways...I really hope you write more. I really just love your writing. I haven't read the rest, but I'm printing it out. I'm printing 22-25 chapter. PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!! I really hope you read my review. Oh no. Now it's getting long, and I have to go to bed. Kyo and Yuki have to go to bed, and I'm still up and in the room they are going to sleep in, typing this review to this wonderful story. Well, I must leave. I need to print the rest of the story, and I also have to get to bed right after. It's around 11:30 here. The fan fic will take about 1 hour to print. Well, I really must go. Must not keep the hour too long. Byes!!!! I JUST THINK YOUR FAN FIC IS THE CUTEST FAN FIC IN THE WHOLE ENTIRE WORLD!!!!!! MINE IS TRASH COMPARED TO YOURS!!!!! AikoYamashina |
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