| "Feelings" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: martianbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2010 21:41 CST
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Umm, well, you could have Kurama almost die and Hiei talking to him, telling him not to let himself die, that only a selfish bastard takes the easy way out, or maybe something not so harsh. You could skip to Kurama feeling better and then have Hiei watching over him and Kurama is confused as to why, wondering if the fire demon really cares. You could also go with Yukina being sad and Hiei trying to be kind but he's not used to it. Then have Hiei and Kurama talking about what happened, having Kurama admit himself to Hiei. There are a lot of things you could do. I liked the story because it is not just the one-shot sex story, even if I like to read those too. I like to read something a bit different every once in a while and I think you should continue writing. If you want more advice or story ideas, I can give more to you. I have too many ideas sometimes so it's hard for me to write because I want to incorporate too many ideas into one fanfic. Anyway, good luck and continue writing.
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood- To lazy to log in On: July 28, 2006 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It would be good if there were more description and less of the author talking...
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Reviewed By: silverkitsune89 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 08:09 CDT
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I hope you can write soon. I can't wait for the next installment
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Reviewed By: Iceheartedprincess On: March 06, 2006 06:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i like your fic so far, i cant wait for you to update soon. so anyway please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 21, 2005 17:06 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: silverkitsune89 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 12:58 CDT
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UPDATE
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Reviewed By: Araxiel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 13:33 CDT
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Go Hiei! Kurama can't die. Damn the clifhangers!
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Reviewed By: silverkitsune89 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go Hiei-sama!!! *hugs kurama plushie* They're so cool. Please update soon. It's really awesome. You should have Kurama wake up soon.
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 10:06 CDT
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You can't just leave it on a cliff hanger like that. I enjoy your story, not too many have I read where Kurama is the one to attempt suicide. I am curious to know what happens, just no more cliff hangers, okay?
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it, but then I do love angst. Very well written fic.
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Reviewed By: kuramas_black_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 03:27 CDT
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wow thats soo sad...poor kurama*cries* good job you should write more!
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Reviewed By: Araxiel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 18:56 CDT
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Heh, got that wrong, i meant i've had 200 veiwers and only three, now four :D, reveiwers. I gotta' star reading what i type ^^; -Ash That you do, baka -Alex
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Reviewed By: silverkitsune89 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kura-chan! Write more soon, this is awesome!
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Reviewed By: Araxiel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 10:59 CDT
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I can't wait for the next chapter, *cries* poor kurama. Yeah, i know how you feel, i've had like 200 reviews, but i only have 3 reviewers. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Mea On: June 02, 2005 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is going to be a great story, your first chapter was awsome! I can't wait for the rest! Please Update Soon! Sincerely Mea ^_^
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