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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your Clips. Each chapter wastes no words, but perfectly captures the characters. There are too few Side B fanfics, and your's is superb. I love seeing a possible relationship between Aya and Chloe develop.
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Reviewed By: kaydihn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written. You pack such intense emotions in very few words. Great job. Keep them coming.
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Reviewed By: Heta Noitio On: June 08, 2005 12:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty nice. I've thought the similarities myself - Michel-Omi, but I kinda set Free in Yoji's place. But well, I don't know so much about B's caharacters. This is well written. The first one is just shocking, and the others reveal more. I always wondered how Aya would react to Ken being in the same team again, and you're description was somehow fitting. *thinks a bit* And when Ken talked about what Yoji had said... It was a good scene. A good clip. Nah, I have no more words left. *smiles a little* You just write well. And I need to read more Weiss Side B fanfics. Write a one? ;)
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Reviewed By: Pulpit On: June 06, 2005 22:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Aya, but he's still the coolest. Won't you write more and make things right for him?
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Reviewed By: Trinity Bennett [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you have arranged the clips so that they follow a linear timeline. I'm very interested if you have anymore. They are all well written and very enjoyable.
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