Reviewed By: Stagoya On: June 22, 2005 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, some friendly advice, not in any way trying to make fun of you or tease you. I simply recommend you have someone proofread your story for spelling and grammar mistakes. I honestly am not trying to be rude, just trying to help. Anyway, that was really neat. Probably one of the most unusual Furuba stories I've ever read. ^_^ Keep it up.
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