Reviewed By: deckman1063 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 08:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Nice! Well written, good story. I can't help but wonder at the Agency continuing to trust Ferro, though, even after "de-programming". Doesn't quite seem in character. But then, they do have experience with conditioning, don't they? And I suppose that the conditioning they used in de-programming would make it easier for her to accept the knowledge that she had been conditioned. A fitting end for Angelica, I think - she got to save Marco one last time. Even with her kidnapping at the end she got to help out one last time, I think. A good read, I thoroughly enjoyed it!
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