| "A Slave to Love" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Like
Reviewed By: bombayoni (thing's broken) On: July 13, 2005 16:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it.... I hope that Yuki gets his memories back and they fall in love...
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Title: Gasp!
Reviewed By: Runa Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spelling and grammer because you spelt 'whore' wrong int eh first paragraph. Good story by far. A tear jerker :'(. Literally.
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Reviewed By: Madagascar Demonic_Star [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 17:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh, that's so sad, who could treat Yuki like that...? But major credit for orignial ideas and great writing style. ^_^ I do look foreward to reading more of your stories.
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Reviewed By: law916 On: June 20, 2005 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good!!! I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it comes soon.
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