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| "Yugi Meets the Saber Dolls: The Lemon" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: Heh.
Reviewed By: Lord of Acid On: July 07, 2005 22:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good stuff.
| Title: Ultra Warrior
Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 17:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Too cool!! Yugi got the night of his life, and also he got laid with three very busty, sexy ladies! The cup-sizes of the Saber Dolls were perfect, F-size about right! Yugi is one damn lucky teenager, and Kaiba is thinking the same thing write now! Both need to get adjusted with having three half-human, half-robot females as both servants (and sex-kittens) but its fine with me! Perhaps Tea can share Yugi with the Dolls. After all, Yugi is very caring and would glaldy share his body with the others. After all, he is one of a kind. Awesome job!! Keep it up!
| Reviewed By: Phoenix727 On: July 06, 2005 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually I don't think Yugi should do any of the Dolls first, Tea deserves to do Yugi first, after that let the three dolls run riot over Yugi. But let Tea have him first, they obviously both want it. Cya, Phoenix
| Title: Ultra Warrior
Reviewed By: DJ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 10:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please, update soon! I want to see on what happens next! Please, I'm begging you to update!!
| Reviewed By: Watakushi On: June 05, 2005 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great stuff! I hope you'll keep writing this. I love DJ's but there needs to be more lemon in it. Yugi is going to have quite a lot to do with four beautiful girls to please. I guessing that the Saber Marrionettes are going to go to Kaiba. Too bad I was hoping Yugi would get all six. I don't really care about Lime or Bloodberry, but I like Cherry. But the whole role reversal is cool. Continue this! I want MORE!!!
| Title: Ultra Warrior
Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was too cool!! Thanks for writing this lemon! I hope you continue it!! I want to see more!! MORE!!! Man, you got very detailed here. Nice! I hope to see some nice interactions between Yugi/Tea and also Yugi/Any of the Saber Dolls! My friend, I thank you from the bottom of my heart! Update soon! Keep it up!
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