| "Yugi Meets the Saber Dolls: The Lemon" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: HELL YEAH! On: February 07, 2008 17:27 CST
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shit this is hot! tea is so sexy, I hate all the yaoi out there who hate her, here she gets all the sex she can handle, and more that she can't, I love it! but c'mon man, have tea and yugi, tea's too hot for just the saber dolls, she needs a man and yugi is it, have them fuck already!
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Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this was seriously kick ass!! So many yuri scenes, and also the part with Yugi with the Dolls, perfect! And Seto getting some of the action, very nice! Thank you very much! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Random Reader On: December 11, 2006 13:53 CST
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writers like you are what's wrong with the fandom. Tea is quite pretty and sexy, I agree. But you make her, AND Yugi for that matter, into a bunch of sex-starved teens. My god, it's disgusting. And messy orgasms are NOT appealing. Really, this is just...ew. Tea is a sweet, pretty schoolgril who is in love with Yugi, you turn her into some sort of a hooker. You should be ashamed.
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 19:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
please continue!!!
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Title: Ultra Warrior
Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 21:30 CST
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0_0 DAMN, THIS WAS TOTALLY HOT!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING!!! So, the Dolls belong to both Yugi and Tea. Good. I hope those two are they only ones who get to play with the Dolls. And, I hope to see Yugi get some action soon from his three lovely, big-breasted bodyguards. ^_^ Keep it up!
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Linkin-Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, that was HOT! This was hotter than part one. Excellent story, I mean excellent story. From a writing stand point I'm impressed how you're able to write sex every chapter, but keep it, pardon the pun, fresh. I think the way the language is used, as well as the fashion in which you emphasis the sounds of sex make the considerably well written and extremely hot. Keep it up, I want to see all four girls pleasure Yugi now, he may not survive, but dying while four amazing hot woman pleasure you is definately one of the best ways to go.
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Title: Impatient
Reviewed By: Linkin-Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update this story soon. I want to see Anzu/Saber Dolls action. And I know this is set during the Doom Saga thing, but I want to see Mai involved. Again please update soon.
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii (not signed in) On: November 06, 2005 01:16 CST
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please continue. it's a really good fic
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Linkin-Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, this is hot. There's no chance of having Mai in this fic is there. Mai and Tea in a scene would be so damn hot!! Great work I hope to see more soon.
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Title: yugi meets the saber dolls
Reviewed By: the outrsiders On: November 01, 2005 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it i know yugi can handle the saber dolls i think yugi and lynx be the first ones thank you. your friend, dale ray cameronii
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Title: Ultra Warrior
Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 16:13 CDT
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0_0 WOW!!! THE DOLLS AND TEA GOING AT IT?!? NOW THAT IS SOME LEMONY GOODNESS THERE!! I WANT TO SEE MORE!!! I was expecting some sort of catfight between Tea and one of the Dolls over Yugi, but this is good. They may have made love to each other, but when it comes down to Yugi... its all out war there!! Keep it up!
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Title: yugi meets saber dolls
Reviewed By: the outsiders On: September 14, 2005 10:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it yugi and saber dolls please making more chapters and making more lemons chapters. please and thank you. your friend, dale ray cameronii
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Title: yugi meets saber dolls
Reviewed By: the undertaker On: August 17, 2005 07:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it yugi with saber dolls but i think first one do it with yugi with panther and with kiba with lime please making some more chapters. your friend, dale ray cameronii
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Reviewed By: Alexander the Unholy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! I'm doing one too... Please bless my fiction with your review DJ! *Grins.* Ah, Anyway! Keep writing Yami Goku!
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Title: yugi meets saber dolls
Reviewed By: the undertaker On: August 03, 2005 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it. yugi and saber dolls i think i like panther/yugi and kibia and lime also thank you your friend dale ray cameronii
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