| "Yugi Meets the Saber Dolls: The Lemon" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: Impatient
Reviewed By: Linkin-Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update this story soon. I want to see Anzu/Saber Dolls action. And I know this is set during the Doom Saga thing, but I want to see Mai involved. Again please update soon.
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii (not signed in) On: November 06, 2005 01:16 CST
Comment/Review:
please continue. it's a really good fic
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Linkin-Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, this is hot. There's no chance of having Mai in this fic is there. Mai and Tea in a scene would be so damn hot!! Great work I hope to see more soon.
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Title: yugi meets the saber dolls
Reviewed By: the outrsiders On: November 01, 2005 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it i know yugi can handle the saber dolls i think yugi and lynx be the first ones thank you. your friend, dale ray cameronii
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Title: Ultra Warrior
Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 16:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
0_0 WOW!!! THE DOLLS AND TEA GOING AT IT?!? NOW THAT IS SOME LEMONY GOODNESS THERE!! I WANT TO SEE MORE!!! I was expecting some sort of catfight between Tea and one of the Dolls over Yugi, but this is good. They may have made love to each other, but when it comes down to Yugi... its all out war there!! Keep it up!
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Title: yugi meets saber dolls
Reviewed By: the outsiders On: September 14, 2005 10:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it yugi and saber dolls please making more chapters and making more lemons chapters. please and thank you. your friend, dale ray cameronii
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Title: yugi meets saber dolls
Reviewed By: the undertaker On: August 17, 2005 07:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it yugi with saber dolls but i think first one do it with yugi with panther and with kiba with lime please making some more chapters. your friend, dale ray cameronii
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Reviewed By: Alexander the Unholy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! I'm doing one too... Please bless my fiction with your review DJ! *Grins.* Ah, Anyway! Keep writing Yami Goku!
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Title: yugi meets saber dolls
Reviewed By: the undertaker On: August 03, 2005 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it. yugi and saber dolls i think i like panther/yugi and kibia and lime also thank you your friend dale ray cameronii
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Title: Heh.
Reviewed By: Lord of Acid On: July 07, 2005 22:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good stuff.
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Title: Ultra Warrior
Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 17:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Too cool!! Yugi got the night of his life, and also he got laid with three very busty, sexy ladies! The cup-sizes of the Saber Dolls were perfect, F-size about right! Yugi is one damn lucky teenager, and Kaiba is thinking the same thing write now! Both need to get adjusted with having three half-human, half-robot females as both servants (and sex-kittens) but its fine with me! Perhaps Tea can share Yugi with the Dolls. After all, Yugi is very caring and would glaldy share his body with the others. After all, he is one of a kind. Awesome job!! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Phoenix727 On: July 06, 2005 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually I don't think Yugi should do any of the Dolls first, Tea deserves to do Yugi first, after that let the three dolls run riot over Yugi. But let Tea have him first, they obviously both want it. Cya, Phoenix
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Title: Ultra Warrior
Reviewed By: DJ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 10:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please, update soon! I want to see on what happens next! Please, I'm begging you to update!!
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Reviewed By: Watakushi On: June 05, 2005 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great stuff! I hope you'll keep writing this. I love DJ's but there needs to be more lemon in it. Yugi is going to have quite a lot to do with four beautiful girls to please. I guessing that the Saber Marrionettes are going to go to Kaiba. Too bad I was hoping Yugi would get all six. I don't really care about Lime or Bloodberry, but I like Cherry. But the whole role reversal is cool. Continue this! I want MORE!!!
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Title: Ultra Warrior
Reviewed By: Daniel Rodriguez [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was too cool!! Thanks for writing this lemon! I hope you continue it!! I want to see more!! MORE!!! Man, you got very detailed here. Nice! I hope to see some nice interactions between Yugi/Tea and also Yugi/Any of the Saber Dolls! My friend, I thank you from the bottom of my heart! Update soon! Keep it up!
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