Title: Hnn
Reviewed By: BizarreLoveTriangle [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... ah. The idea is nice, but the grammar is very bad. So is the spelling and the punctuation. So is the format... Try putting it into word. That will catch a lot of the problems. And once that's done try doulbe spacing it, so it's... readable.
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