| "Green Eyed Monster" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: BloodyBlack [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This fic is awesome. i love it please up date soon i want to see how this "Date" is going to go! keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: chaosrising [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 21:02 CDT
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please write more. i want to see how the date goes.
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Reviewed By: crazy-chick14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 17:18 CDT
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i really like this story hahaha! so funny..hope u update soon,keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: kiori [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 23:35 CDT
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I like the way you wrote Ed's feelings about Al. You made it clear how much he cared about him but he's still sorta independent. Also, thank you for pairing Al with Winry instead of Ed. I really don't think Ed and Winry go together. I think you did a good job keeping them in character so far. Needs a little work in the grammar/spelling area, but overall you did a good job.
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Title: Ooh! Naughty!
Reviewed By: Aurora DeNeil [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 11:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tens across the board! You rock! I can't wait to see what happens next and thank you so much for making Ed even more drool-worthy than he already is! You rule! ;)
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 09:44 CST
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really now...LOL...So Roy is gonna make nice w/Ed\'s toys...LOL...that was GREAT...Oh man...that was REALLY GREAT...and I ALMOST feel sorry for ROy w/Ed prancing around in that Outfit...heheheh
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 23:37 CST
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Great beginning!!!
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Reviewed By: envious-angel On: September 28, 2005 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you going to update? I wanna find out what happens! Please update soon. *gets down on her knees and begs*
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Reviewed By: lilangel On: August 22, 2005 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic.Please update soon.I cant wait to see what happens.I have a question, is this fic on any other sites.TTYL
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Reviewed By: waruikittycat On: August 17, 2005 15:29 CDT
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It's been a really good fic, but when are Ed and Roy going to get it on?! I wanna see some Fullmetal/Flame action!!!
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Title: forever broken
Reviewed By: forever broken [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 08:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
ahw how cute.. and cocky. but still good! and when are you going to put ed and roy together?
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Title: Very Nice
Reviewed By: animeempress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 13:05 CDT
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I would have killed Hughes if he had done that t me. But I liked that chapter a whole lot please keep writing
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 01:36 CDT
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what's gonna happen with the box? I mean there has to be something to do with it since you described it in such detail... when will they just admit it and fuck already?
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Reviewed By: forever broken (nli) On: July 25, 2005 05:08 CDT
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this was just way to funny! keep up the good work! I so LOVE this story! so when is ed going to screw roy ^_^ whaha sorry anyhooble I still like the story!
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Title: HOT HOT HOT
Reviewed By: animeempress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all don't be insulted if you don't like my ratings first thkng I'm not gay I'm also a chick and I have read plenty of love scense before and this was just as good as any of them. I also think that it has a very pro writen style. I like it very much
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