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| "In The Arms Of An Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Tenshi Taiyono [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww so sweet yet so perverted. Keep up the good work
| Reviewed By: BrokenEMO [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found it quite interesting! It , honestly, was the best I've ever read! Wonderful! *claps* This is defiently going on my fanvorites list! MMMHMM!! Heh, I don't see how people think that Krad's seme-ness was suprising...I honestly didn't think it was. But I'm sure the Krad I rp with in yahoo instant messenger would disagree. He's Uke. Heh. But that's besides the point! Good job! You should do more like this! Ignore what ever anyone else says about the mushy romance, they know nothing! Cause I find it deisturbing to read a lemon when the people don't want to hook up at then end. It's just wrong. Anyway, I've been working on a DNAngel/Spiral crossover fic...I would like for you to read it. You can find it by going to my profile and all that jazz. Please in your review...if you review I'll love you forever, tell me what you thought and if you have any ideas for future chapters. Since I just started it's only one chapter long. But that's besides the point. *favs your story* JA NE! Hope you can write more like this.
| Title: Loved it!
Reviewed By: ‚Ï‚ñ‚¾‚¿‚á‚Ž On: June 14, 2005 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There were some grammar and spelling mistakes, but overall it was a wonderful read! Krad's seme-ness was really surprising. o_O;
| Title: Nice Try But...
Reviewed By: toaster On: June 07, 2005 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, what can I say? It was kind of cheesy. ^__^" At any rate, I suggest the two of you ditch the trashy romance novels for some quality time with your school textbooks. You'll get to learn about exciting things like grammar, cliches, repetition, and plot development! Those annoying language arts teachers can also be pretty damn useful sometimes... Also, I'm pretty sure "hikari" is the female version of "light." (That's what my anime-obese friend told me anyway.) There's also a song called "Hikari" that was translated and sung as "Simple and Clean." I think Uteda sings it, but I'm not sure.
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