| "Salvation of Silence" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Broken pain On: July 23, 2005 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story and Ryou is also my top favorite charcter. It was sad Ryou died to keep himslf from goinging insane. I didn't won't Ryou to die; that was a wrong way to put Ryou. I thought Ryou was your favri
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Reviewed By: forever broken (nli) On: June 14, 2005 05:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
it was pretty nice and I also don't get why bakura didn't stop ryou??!! anyhooble it still was a good story, sad but really good! and who can blame you!!! BAKURA and RYOU ARE THE GREATEST CHARACTERS! best characters *angelface*
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Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: June 06, 2005 02:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
well, it seems a bit unlogical that Bakura wouldn't stop his host from killing himself, like, why didn't he take over, you skimped a bit on the detail in the story as well...but other than that it was a nice read
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