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Title: ch.2
Reviewed By: Peacemaker(not logged in) On: July 08, 2005 03:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I believe that I may have read ch.1 on ff but, I am not certain. The story is pretty good so far and I am hoping that number three will be just as good. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Reviewed By: kyusaiimaru On: June 08, 2005 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool fic, i like your style. I'm happy that you made the guys goths, I thought that was a really nice touch. oh yeah, I have a lot of the clothes you mentioned in the fic. The shirt, the one that says give me a dolar and I'll go away... I've made 20 bucks :)
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Reviewed By: the grace of hatred [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 19:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've noticed that in one day there was 20 visits... and it made me soo happy.. hahah this is my first fan fic for those of you who haven't figured it out yet.. and all this is soo new to me soo if i get confused... dont ask...
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