| "A love to remember" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: not bad
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 15:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's not bad for a first timer in the fanfic division. It needs some work on it, perhaps try to make it a bit longer if possible but still a good fanfic ^ ^ Nice job
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Title: jeninuyashalover
Reviewed By: jeninuyashalover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so cute i would have gave you a full ten but since your new at writing you should find out easy that you should allways space but hey im a new writer to and i kinda messed up like that before but good fic you should write more
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Reviewed By: inusho [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story. It was cute. I like the Sango and Miroku fanfics. Hurry up and put the next chapter in. I CAN'T WAIT! PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 23:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your formatting is messed up. There are no paragraphs, just one big block of text centered in the page. Please fix it.
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Reviewed By: Maikeru On: June 06, 2005 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was interesting and a good start to making even better fanfics in the future. In my experiance, it is important to make the story not flow too fast to confuse the audiance, or too slow to bore them, but to balance on the fine line in between. You did a good job of being entertaining. I hope I read more in the future! ^_^
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