| "Ashes to Ashes" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Pyro-Bunny On: August 22, 2005 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!THAT WAS REALLY GOOD AND PRETTY DARN ORIGINALL PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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Title: Review/Comment
Reviewed By: 01wing On: June 25, 2005 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great but agreeing with the others below it is a tad bit hard to read in block, not that im complaining or anything i'll gladly read it in block. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Monje EJ (to lazy to sign in) On: June 09, 2005 22:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think the story has a lot of potential, I like it and I hope you continue it but I have to agree with them ^ with it in block that its hard to read
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Reviewed By: dentelle_noir [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 16:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like the idea and the base plaot, but you HAVE to do somthing about the formatting, it's all one big block!
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