| "Diplomacy" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Superb fic
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 02:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Finally someone portraying Hinata as an individual with a life of her own and Hiashi not as psycho dad.
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Reviewed By: ozarina of oz On: December 19, 2005 02:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a intresting fanfic , when are u going to update ?
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Reviewed By: Xoni Newcomer On: September 25, 2005 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I can't believe this fanfic doesn't get much more recognition. I don't come to mediaminer much so I don't know whether this is normal here. Why don't you post it on FFN with your other one? I like what you're doing with Hinata, and Hanabi too. Things flow in a very natural way. I know Hinata is just human, but I think someone with her nature would have been able to endure Chie's torture for more than just one day. I'm not a patient person, and yet I was able to withstand an annoying partner for 3 weeks before drawing the line. I'm sure Hinata could do much better than I did. And I think it was a mistake to make her shout. Making her voice stressed, snappy and more forceful than usual would have been more appropiated. Even if Hinata isn't as shy anymore, yelling in anger is just not for her, and I can't imagine her being that angry after just a day. Not to mention, she's still enough of a pushover to let Chie to keep calling her by a nickname she dislikes.
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Reviewed By: Saico On: June 11, 2005 06:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really liked reading this. I love when fics give characters new depths, and when a different character than usual is the one to save the day. Hinata is slowly maturing, and this time she has to face the problem all by herself. I want to see what Chie is hiding.
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Reviewed By: Saico On: June 11, 2005 06:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really liked reading this. I love when fics give characters new depths, and when a different character than usual is the one to save the day. Hinata is slowly maturing, and this time she has to face the problem all by herself. I want to see what Chie is hiding.
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Title: Yay! I LOVE this story!
Reviewed By: RayWolf is here! On: June 07, 2005 06:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY! I've never been really into drama and that stuff, but I really like this one! I really want to read your other story! Can't wait to read your next chapter!
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