Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: June 07, 2005 10:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love the first part! The second isn't there and the first part is in the summery part of it. Below the summery is the title and the words Table of Contents and page one. I think that's where the story is supposed to go instead of in the summery. And I really want to read the second part so could you please fix that? It's really cool and so cute with Bakura all sad and troubled and Ryou all caring and 'let me help you' kind of thing. I'm trying to write something similar only with a YamixBakura kind of thing. I'm fond of your pairings to though and I would love to see how it comes out. Please finish soon and get me that second part! If there is any and it hasn't been deleted or lost or something like that. Thank You. DK;) P.S. Pardon the long review.
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