Reviewed By: whimsy007 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first InuYasha/Amber crossover that I've seen. You're ideas are somewhat creative although I expected that the Shikon is related to the Pattern and that one or more of the group is related to Corwin. Japan as prison/exile for Chaosians was not expected. I find your writing style decent, but too sparse with detail. When not seeing Corwin's thoughts, so much of the writing is dialogue that it sometimes reads more like a play. For Miroku, finding out that he is a prince of Amber ( his mother was full Amber royalty) and the grandson from incest between Corwin and Deirdre, who were full siblings, should be pretty shocking. It seems doubtful that Kagome is a descendant of Amber royalty since Souta doesn't show any special abilities . What does Fiona know about Kagome? But InuYasha and Sess as Swayvill's sons did catch me by surprise. Will InuYasha negotioate the Logrus? Jurt and Mandor aren't sons of Swayvill. They and Despil are sons of Sawall.
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