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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 21:08 CDT
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I like reading it I hope you up date soon.
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Reviewed By: inu-hanyou2 (too lazy to sign in) On: June 21, 2005 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, again.. Please update soon! You are very talented!
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 02:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story. I beleive you about the kitty. I had the same story with mine a year ago.It grew to be a big and appreciative kitty.
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Reviewed By: starlit333 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome... you must update soon! Or I...I... I don't know what I'll do!
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Reviewed By: inu-hanyou2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
REview for chapter two! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: inu-hanyou2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U made me cry! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: werewolfpixie On: June 10, 2005 20:15 CDT
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i think you did pretty dang good. keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 13:23 CDT
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Great story so far. I hope Kagome doesn't get hurt because of all this. Keep up the great writing ^__^
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Reviewed By: DA On: June 09, 2005 22:50 CDT
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I like the story so far and would love to see you continue with this work.
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Reviewed By: NA On: June 09, 2005 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story - looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 18:51 CDT
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Hi again. Inuyasha can go back and forth through the well without a shard. He always has. If Inuyasha is carrying Kagome, then she can go through with him without a shard. Shippou has tried to get through even with a shard and cannot. But anyway, I'm still enjoying your story so thanks for updating.
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Title: NO!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!
Reviewed By: NEW FAN!!! On: June 09, 2005 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT!!!! Are you CRAZY!!!! This story is bringing me to tears!!!! You have to update it!!!! Don't hate it!! You must write more!!! I'm gonna beg...I'm not ashamed...please update!
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Title: woot!
Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 22:50 CDT
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I love where you're going with this! It's really emotional and heart-wrenching! Good job!!! Keep going!
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Reviewed By: mela On: June 08, 2005 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good you should continue please
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 19:29 CDT
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Good story so far, but I just want to point out one mistake. Kagome can go back home (to present time) through the well without the jewel. Remember the episode where Inuyasha hugged her and took the jewel from her and then pushed her down the well? She CAN travel to her time without a jewel shard, but she CANNOT travel to the past without one. I hope you update soon. Thanks.
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