| "Once Upon a Chat room..." Reviews/Comments [ 127 ] |
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Title: yayfulness
Reviewed By: white_thing_one [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay, an update!!!!
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Reviewed By: starlit333 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The mystery girl's Kagome! He needs to find out in the next chapter so he isn't confused anymore. That was great with the cake and everything... I thought it was actually going to taste good! I guess I was wrong! Please update soon! ~starlit333
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: Devils-only-one [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 19:21 CDT
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hahaha i love it write more.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 09:40 CDT
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YAY!!! you updated. poor yashie, he just doesnt have what it takes to work in a diner. update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: The very best...
Reviewed By: MysteriousLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 04:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read alot of fanfics before, but I can tell you that this is the BEST that I have had the chance to read. A few grammar mistakes here and there, but it's not bad. I can't wait for the update and I hope that it's as good as the other chapter. And I hope in one of your future chapters Kikyo get seriously told off by Inuyasha about her problem with Kagome.
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Title: Goodie! An update!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I've been waiting on this one -cute chap. Looking fwd to more.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 22:45 CDT
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Nice purple by the way. Nice to mix things up every once in a while. Wow...I don't know many guys who would fill in their girlfriends job. Inu is truly one of a kind. Wow, Inuyasha finds out Kagome's secret...this is bound to be interesting.
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Reviewed By: Lady_Ame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW I LOVE IT!!! it's SSOOOO hillarious please dont keep me waiting for the next chapter.... im gonna die from the suspense! *crokes over* NO!!!!! *pops up alive* must finish reading story first!
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Reviewed By: katie... On: August 29, 2005 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
woo! i love this! update soon please... blah
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 16:30 CDT
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U HAV TO UPDATE ASAP PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!=)
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 15:07 CDT
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LMAO...that was sooo funny...dish soap...omg...that was great...I can't wait until the next chapter...He'll finally find out who Kagome really is...wow...until next time...great job, please update soon...luvs Ty
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Reviewed By: luvhanyou On: August 24, 2005 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story please update soon asap
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Title: ssoooo good
Reviewed By: scryazngirl On: August 19, 2005 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ive been keepin tabs on diz story waitin fo u to update it for soo long now, i hope u dont just leave it at dat. der r very few interestin inu fic bout online chattin..... plz update it soon.......
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sooooo enjoying this!!! Please update soon! It's really good! =D
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Reviewed By: Ditke [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 11:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please... I like this story so much, update, update, I'm begging, I'm on my knees...
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