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Reviewed By: sweetygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 14:29 CDT Comment/Review: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ice girl On: July 18, 2005 14:23 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please up date i mush know what is going to happen
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Reviewed By: ~Kisaki_NekoYasha~ On: July 17, 2005 23:08 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yay!! So good! Update soon please!!!!
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 14:13 CDT Comment/Review: update asap PLEASE!!=)
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Title: I am SO ready for an update! Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 11:17 CDT Comment/Review: Pleeeease update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 10:53 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Please don't stop writing on this story It is so awesome....and what is so great about cyber sex? It's pure randomness? ...lol
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Reviewed By: hp e c On: July 15, 2005 22:52 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this story reminds me of a moive i have cenderella story and i like it
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Reviewed By: Irish Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 20:08 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: More MORE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: EXCELLENT!! Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 00:20 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow...this story is excellent! :D I'm so glad that I found it! I have to say this is a highly original idea, I don't think I've ever seen anything quite like this! (And I love Kagome's attempts at trying to dodge Inuyasha's questions...its so funny!) Well, please, update again soon, when you can! I will be patiently waiting until then! Bye! :D
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Reviewed By: starlit333 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 15:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This fanfic was highly recommended by someone I know. I've passed this by a few times but I never bothered to read it. So I finally read it and I love it! Please update soon! The next chapter sounds interesting. ~starlit333
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Reviewed By: inus_fave_girl On: July 08, 2005 20:11 CDT Comment/Review: hey girl i just want to tell u that i love your stories they are so interesting. Ca i please ask you a question? Can you please tell me what's the name of the song inuyasha and kagome were listening in the car please, it sound really interesting and i would like to know the name of the song,so can u please tell me in your next chapter,please. love your stories for real,thanks!
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Reviewed By: cbear628 On: July 08, 2005 19:28 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i am a big online buff and to see them in that same situation is well very refreshing because they are only slightly ooc for being the story has changed slightly.. thanks and keep it up i love this
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Reviewed By: MirokuMonk On: July 08, 2005 19:05 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: THIS IS REALY GOOD I CAN'T WAIT TO FING OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
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Title: SWEET! Reviewed By: SatsukiTheFox On: July 08, 2005 18:55 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I LOVE YOUR STORY!... its really cool so i hope you make this a LOONG fic because i enjoy reading it!
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Reviewed By: Sin of Intelligence On: July 08, 2005 15:13 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: This fanfic really larcks the originality and creativity I was looking forward to reading. The storyline is quite typical and already overused. [Kinda by Hillary Duff's move, Cinderella- something, I don't remember....Did i even spell her name right? Doesn't matter...] The storyline is much too predictable and there's not much to make it interesting. One of the very few things things that caught the meager amount of attention I put to reading this so far boring story is how crude Kikyo is...I nver really thought you could make her any worse than she already is, but her's your story with the typical cheerleader captain- who bullys people and stuff. MY SUBLIMELY GENIOUS IDEA- shove Kikyo off a cliff, or...Kill Her. Overall, this isn't getting my attention much, but I hope this reviews help you change this story to a more captivating fanfic even if it has an overused storyline..... Also, this is not a stupid flamer but merely constructive advice. If you don't want it than you aren't prepared enough to be even close to an author much less a fanfiction writer.
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