| "The Kill" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 10, 2002 03:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great stuff dude. I can actually close my eyes and visualize the fight scenes, the scenery and I can sense the raw emotion from the characters. I can't stand King Kold though. He's such an asshole, a trait he obviously passed down to his spawns from hell. Who's the mystery woman and what does she have to do with what is about to happen? Guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out. Later |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 22, 2001 01:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG!!! What a kick-ass chapter!!! I wonder who survived-was it one of Garlic's henchmen? What the hell is goin on? And poor Gohan, will he ever remember what went on at the Lookout? Well?! What are you doing reading this review? Sit your ass down and finish this before I keel over. Later Genius, I'll be waiting for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 19, 2001 04:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'll say it again-this is simply wonderful. The way you describe what's going on makes the reader feel like they're really there. Nothing short of phenomenol. Can't wait for the rest. HHHUUURRRRRYYYUUUPPPPPPP!!! |
Reviewed By: nice-day [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2001 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To think, when I saw the last review, I thought the reader might have been exaggerating! This is some fic. Can't say I've read anything with quite this much quality on every count. The descriptions of the emotions, the careful weighting of dialogue, thought, and description, it all comes together beautifully. Admittedly, I've only read the first chapter, but even that would have made a first rate fic. You should be very proud of this. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 16, 2001 06:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this fic is unreal. Beautifully written. I'm at a loss for words (rare for me). The fight scene in chapter 1 was exciting. Veggie being tortured made me sick to my stomach. The biggest thing is that now the future has been changed, like Veggie-Bulma=No Trunks and Kami knows what else. You gotta get the next chapter out asap before I have a heart attack. I'll be waiting... |
