| "A strange girl in a strange world" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: YEAH!!!!
Reviewed By: InnocentInu118 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 13:29 CDT
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YES MAKE IT GO THROUGH THE WELL!!!!!I want to know how he will react to the future!!!!
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Reviewed By: Keisha On: July 18, 2005 16:52 CDT
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have him go thru the well
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Reviewed By: moonwave [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 20:30 CDT
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I think the basic plot is good, if somewhat predictable. (But hey, that's the reason people read romance novels.) I would, however suggest that you get a beta-reader, or use spell check. Sometimes the errors are a little overwhelming. If you'd like, I could beta for you if you don't have anyone else in mind. Other than that, thumbs up!
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Reviewed By: Keisha On: July 02, 2005 22:39 CDT
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good chapter! and i think you have it right in your story---i think Sesshomaru's left arm is cut off
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Reviewed By: Keisha On: June 29, 2005 23:04 CDT
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hey good chapter....kind of a cliffhanger since you dont know why she was attacked.....update soon!
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Title: pixieme
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 19:22 CDT
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Heh, love your character. HOpe to see this updated soon, good story.
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Reviewed By: Keisha On: June 25, 2005 22:36 CDT
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i really liked this chapter....anything with sesshomaru in it is always great :) update asap!
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Reviewed By: KeishaBit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 23:16 CDT
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story is going good so far. upate asap!
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